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Author really missed their chance to name the sword ‘Neuvillette’ or ‘Hydro Sovereign’

Wait, what? Only 15 years, but Hermione and Neville’s eldest is 3rd year so 13/14 (depending on when she was born in the year), so Hermione was pregnant during her 6th and/or 7th year?

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Interesting first chapter, I was not expecting other Naruto characters to appear, looking forward to see where you take the plot.

Being related to Voldemort makes no sense, as Voldemort’s connection to Slytherin and the Ophias line is through his mother, but the Ophias line can’t have daughters because of the curse. So how was Merope Gaunt born?

Oh a mini arc, would love to see a radio episode with Dr Fraiser Crane and Billie

Chapter needs serious editing, Author keeps calling Meroupe Anne in it

86k seems too low, no genin kill has given Ragnar less than 50 exp, let’s assume all 3000 kills were genin (50-100 exp each), that’s still 150,000 points minimum, not counting the 100’s of chunin (100-500 exp each), special Jonin (500-1000 exp each) and the 20 confirmed Jonin kills (1000+ exp each) It would be more accurate to say he earned 250k+ from that fight (using average exp for each ninja rank), if author sticks to their own exp gain allocation.

Hope we get to see him using the Buddha fruit, perfect cover when in the light, shame it’s a little low level compared to his other fruits

Why not just say that you heard about Elder Danzo and root, so decided to stay off is radar until he was strong enough to refuse him. Much more believable, and Kakashi would sympathise with him, and Asuma would obviously tell the third and likely Jiriya. And both likely would understand, given what Danzo is like.