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of course it was to lengthen the story. Similar to how many authors add fillers and jokes to slow down the pace of the story and add more chapters. They want cash $$

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It's just not good... I wouldn't recommend this. As for why, look for the most liked reviews. - Coming from someone who have read the raw version of the novel.

Nah dude, Astral Pet Store is way way better than this. This novel is like a book of encyclopedia full of self made up monsters. Good luck reading this. Personally, I think it's way tougher to read this than studying physics ROFL.

I'll tell you what, even with perfect translation this novel will still suck. I read this novel in the raw version and it's literally the same kind of shit.

I can't find the raw.

No it's not that.

Do you guys have the raw version of the book?

I tried to search for the author and no results. I tried 北岛雨林 or 北岛树林 yet there's no such name on qidian/faloo.

Author-san give us the raw name pleaseeeeeee----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Is it? I can't find anything with this name.

What's the Chinese name of this novel?

I still think this story is great. You can see from the ratings, but I understand nothing is perfect. Maybe try [Chronicles of Primordial Wars].

Yes, they didn't die, but they are always put in dangerous situations, which again extremely forced dangerous situations that could have been prevented if the MC was just a tad bit smarter with the use of his system (I read the story in Chinese so idk what its called in the English version). Romance in this story is shit too.

Chen Wudi is literally one of them. You guys might say it's part of the story to let Chen Wudi die, and I understand somewhat, but there's many other ways that the author could have prevented/salvage the situation, but he just wanted to write Chen Wudi's death. Even if the author wanted to let him die, he can choose not to write it in a way that's so forced and also shows how stupid and stubborn the MC is. The MC could have brought his friends and families into the wilderness or bring them to far away forts instead of putting them in danger by bringing them to those forts that they know are going to be involved/destroyed in war. Sometimes the story doesn't make sense at all, and those situations feel extremely forced. I've finished reading [Lord of The Mysteries], and the story is so natural. I know tragedies happen, but i don't like the way the author writes it. Sorry if there's grammatical errors as English is not my main language. I've also read this story in the original Chinese version, that's why the feelings that I felt might be more pronounced. If there's anyone looking for similar stories with a similar setting/world building (powerful animals, dangerous forest, superpowers), you can try [Chronicles of Primordial Wars]. Even though it's not fully translated yet, but I've already finished reading the book (raw), and it's much better than The First Order.

Don't ever read this book. Interesting start but it worsens later on. After chp200+ is just plain torture to read. Extremely forced situations that always puts MC and his friends in danger. MC's true friends and families die left and right in these forced dangerous situations. What's worse is like they have a bad aura following them around, wherever they go, disaster follows. They always fail to leave the enemies, like they can stay in a group of victims in the wild for 10+ days, and on for example day 13, they say it's not safe let's leave, but all of a sudden on that particular day that they're trying to leave, enemies arrive and they get caught, like wtf? So forced that it makes me so disgusted. Please don't ever read this book. Good reviews are for the first 200 chapters, after chp200 it's pure torture. Leave before you regret.

Don't ever read this book. After chp200+ is just plain torture to read. Extremely forced situations that always puts MC and his friends in danger. MC's true friends and families die left and right in these forced dangerous situations. What's worse is like they have a bad aura following them around, wherever they go, disaster follows. They always fail to leave the enemies, like they can stay in a group of victims in the wild for 10+ days, and on for example day 13, they say it's not safe let's leave, but all of a sudden on that particular day that they're trying to leave, enemies arrive and they get caught, like wtf? So forced that it makes me so disgusted. Please don't ever read this book. Good reviews are for the first 200 chapters, after chp200 it's pure torture. Leave before you regret.

SAME! Don't ever read this book. After chp200+ is just plain torture to read. Extremely forced situations that always puts MC and his friends in danger. MC's true friends and families die left and right in these forced dangerous situations. What's worse is like they have a bad aura following them around, wherever they go, disaster follows. They always fail to leave the enemies, like they can stay in a group of victims in the wild for 10+ days, and on for example day 13, they say it's not safe let's leave, but all of a sudden on that particular day that they're trying to leave, enemies arrive and they get caught, like wtf? So forced that it makes me so disgusted. Please don't ever read this book. Good reviews are for the first 200 chapters, after chp200 it's pure torture. Leave before you regret.

NO! Don't ever read this book. After chp200+ is just plain torture to read. Extremely forced situations that always puts MC and his friends in danger. MC's true friends and families die left and right in these forced dangerous situations. What's worse is like they have a bad aura following them around, wherever they go, disaster follows. They always fail to leave the enemies, like they can stay in a group of victims in the wild for 10+ days, and on for example day 13, they say it's not safe let's leave, but all of a sudden on that particular day that they're trying to leave, enemies arrive and they get caught, like wtf? So forced that it makes me so disgusted. Please don't ever read this book. Good reviews are for the first 200 chapters, after chp200 it's pure torture. Leave before you regret.