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ExpIMMORTAL

ExpIMMORTAL

Lv4
2019-03-18 Se unióPhilippines
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  • ExpIMMORTAL
    ExpIMMORTAL3 years ago
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    take care author san hope u get well soon😊

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    ExpIMMORTAL3 years ago
    respondió a ExpIMMORTAL

    it's ok 😊 I find quite interesting how u progress the story than the other one I read I will stick to your work if it can bring me some twist and unique from its counter part😁👌

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    ExpIMMORTAL3 years ago
    respondió a ExpIMMORTAL

    not minor though I mean different names, gangs, city but the concept and idea are the same

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    ExpIMMORTAL3 years ago
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    I do have concerns about this is this really your work or just copying are u the author of the legendary mech army ???? it has the same story with minor differences just verifying...

  • ExpIMMORTAL
    ExpIMMORTAL3 years ago
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    2nd option is better author san😁

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    ExpIMMORTAL3 years ago
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    author san is dope💪 great start of the story I hope u can update more🤗🤗

  • ExpIMMORTAL
    ExpIMMORTAL3 years ago
    respondió a TheYoungMan

    I've been at chapter 1271 of the raw sadly it gets boring as the story progress 😢 so I've stop reading it. maybe someday I can continue reading it again🤗

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    ExpIMMORTAL3 years ago
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    author-san don't let us down🥺🥺🥺 I can't wait to start 😁😁 I'm super excited for this kind of concept an interesting piece of work I must Sya😁😁😁

  • ExpIMMORTAL
    ExpIMMORTAL4 years ago
    respondió a Killerpants

    I make that comment because he was being bullied repeatedly by big ass grown man and I hate bullies I like to make them know their place 😂😂

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    ExpIMMORTAL4 years ago
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    I'm really disappointed by the attitude of the mc in early chapters he was beaten almost to the death did not even consider revenge is ok to me since modern humans is afraid of killing their kin for the first but then this chapter he was almost killed again WTH humans have survival instinct where it will trigger something that can by pass the common sense of a modern person from killing someone if he was close to death that's why night is disappointed of him, a coward,retarded, and naive MC he was always telling himself to forget modern sense to adapt ancient era sense but I observe there is no improvement of MC but still it's an early chapters so improvement takes slow I do hope that MC will improve. well it's just my own opinion I'm not dropping this one since I see potential and I'm curious of what will the MC achieve in ancient times..