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Zorgus1yrComentado porCh 77 Greeting Her- Zorgus1yrComentado porCh 93 Grief
- Zorgus1yrComentado porCh 193 Improvements for the Sector and a Letter from the Duke
- Zorgus1yrComentado porCh 191 Cultivator Versus Heavens
- Zorgus1yrComentado por
doves should be droves here
It was one thing to be bombarded by many explosive projectiles from the opposing side, but it was another thing to see your own cultivators dying in doves at the hands of the enemy's counterparts. It was the exact moment when the bandits started to seriously lose their morale and began to feel the helplessness of the situation. They finally understood the bleakness of the situation ahead of them. And the unspoken truth that they were going to be slaughtered like animals at the hands of the troop of the Aemilia clan began to set in. - Zorgus1yrComentado por
i like this chapter, last chapter’s second half… not so much. It’s not foreshadowing when you tell us exactly what the outcome of the war is. Maybe place the Rubrum Trivia of the afermath if an event where consequences go, after the events. Just a suggestion that would make it more enjoyable to read in my opinion.
Ch 180 Slaying Bandits Left and Right - Zorgus1yrComentado porCh 169 Storm Dragon God’s Descend (Bonus Chapter)
- Zorgus1yrComentado porCh 168 168. The Necromancer, The Dude
- Zorgus1yrComentado porCh 167 167. Two Music Enjoyers
- Zorgus1yrComentado porCh 141 The One Inside the Storm Well
- Zorgus1yrComentado porCh 135 Dance with the Beast
- Zorgus1yrComentado porCh 205 Monster Stampede
- Zorgus1yrComentado porCh 102 102. A Sight To Behold
- Zorgus1yrComentado porCh 97 97. It's A Trap!
- Zorgus1yrrespondió a VhinxCh 261 The Double Standard Dog Kicked Out of School
- Zorgus1yrComentado porCh 258 Book a Place for You At the Crematorium
- Zorgus1yrComentado porCh 218 Money For Children
- Zorgus1yrComentado porCh 156 The First Match
- Zorgus1yrComentado porCh 214 This Errand Boy is Too Awesome