ElusiveBucket

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makes it feel like you started with only two but decided to turn it into a harem without changing the story. why bother reincarnating the two wives in that since. just make him the only reincarnation at that point.

honestly, my only real issue is it felt like you were setting it up as only luna and rose with the whole reincarnated soul mates thing and then just threw it away by saying 'oh yeah let's just bring in this random girl!'

well to be exact, the price of his soul in the diary horcrux. that's why they were talking about becoming the main soul

no, it's just voldemort tricking malfoy, hence the title

any update on your patreon?

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If you want him to eventually be at the level of a literal god you could have it as his body and mind need to adapt to the new energy so he unconsciously put a limit on the power he could use that grows weaker over a long time.

She was originally held by Stryker before he gave her to strucker. Stryker was trying to make her into a soldier, or more accurately a weapon.

The maths not mathing