Nebula18457
I just thought it'd be fun to write, so that's why I'm here. To those who support me, thank you.
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Nebula184573 years agoPublicado porOverall the stories there. But the author needs to work on their grammar. But well reading, the good parts of the novel outweigh the bad. Like the author's descriptions and the way that they describe the characters.
- Nebula184573 years agorespondió a NotSubaru
hehehehe. I know. I told you.
- Nebula184573 years agorespondió a Nebula18457
Just copy and paste the link into a tab.
- Nebula184573 years agoComentado por
https://www.webnovel.com/book/a-girl-named-sin_20691917905796805
- Nebula184573 years agorespondió a Dxvil
That's what I was going for.
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - Nebula184573 years agorespondió a NotSubaru
What do you mean by that?
- Nebula184573 years agorespondió a NotSubaru
Well, I'd hope my Novel's interesting.
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado. - Nebula184573 years agorespondió a NotSubaru
Same, I loved the hunger games.
- Nebula184573 years agorespondió a NotSubaru
Keres is not the main villain's real name. The name Keres was given to him cause he was blessed by the female dark spirit of old. But I'll get into that in his back story. His real name does start with a K tho.
- Nebula184573 years agoPublicado por
The novel was amazing, the storyline flowed well, the plot made sense, and the character design was good too. But the grammar wasn't up to scratch. There's a lot of work that needs to be done when it comes to this aspect of things. That said, keep going author, you're doing an amazing job so far.
