CanorBrando
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CanorBrando3hComentado porDamn, $600 for a month isn’t great. Do what you have to do, but I’d hope the max priv price doesn’t change much. I’m assuming your just changing the pricing per chapter and the lower priv pricing? Since you signed the Webnovel contract not sure what you can do for marketing it. But see if you can work with them to post the free chapters on other sites as well, hopefully to generate enough intrest that they follow the rest at Webnovel. Not sure how crazy the contract is, but moving the first couple arcs to Amazon Audio Books could be great to increase sales. I believe they had partnered with them for a diff book before. Maybe bring back the pat**on as well. Dont offer the chapters there since I know your not allowed. But offer other incentives like possible the following: - join an exclusive discord - free custom t-shirt after X-months of subbing and total donated. - 1 on 1 session with you to discus ideas - ability to name a background character (within reason, can’t have ppl names ‘ButtDoom69’ lol) Crazy option would be to work with another person on another book project. They come up with the ideas, you can modify to an extent. Then your just filling in the blanks. Might save a ton of time thinking of the world building, characters, plot, ect… - If this is interesting, make sure to start with a shorter book so your not locked in if it turns out badly. Idk hope this helps. But we love ya Baiko so good luck man.
Ch 730 An Impossible Foe- CanorBrando5hComentado porThen, the structure began to cave in, almost imploding on itself. Its surfaces bent and broke, crushing the innermost areas. The process continued even when Khan stepped into the universe protected by a mana barrier. He reached his ship just in time to watch the space station explode from the scanners.
- CanorBrando1dComentado porCh 729 Enemy At The Gate
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Nothing to see here…
Though we hid behind the boxes, we weren't too deep in the dark alley. But we were closer to the Rakshasa and the entrance and behind the closest boxes to the entrance. - CanorBrando1dComentado porKhan stopped advancing when he entered the lab. The atmosphere was clearly different, but that wouldn't have been enough to slow him down. Yet, spotting Margaret and one of Baoway's blue bushes on the desk beside her could.
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My Lin should look like a fetus lol
Of course, this was just their appearance, and their true age was a thousand times more considering they were all immortals! - CanorBrando1dComentado por
Put it in the ring filled with space qi?
"It seems to be able to absorb energy passively on its own." Lin Mu stated. "I can also charge it with Spatial Qi, but the sheer amount needed is way beyond what I can control now." He added. - CanorBrando1drespondió a Abhi_Garg
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“Rescue me spider daddy” - Lin Wu
Massive Spatial Disturbances could be felt and tens of Spatial Tears were appearing by the second. The space behind the Spatial Tears was pitch black, but if one looked at it from the right angle, they would see a golden yellow glow shining within it. - CanorBrando3dComentado porUnlike the massive-sized guards, this one was small in stature, close to that of a human, although it was quadrupedal like its brethren, it had a more "Human" physique. As its front arms looked similar to that of mankind, while its four legs were thinner and leaner. Its body was quite skinny, but its head was completely different. The size of its head was massive to say the least. Unlike the xenomorph skull on every other rakshasa, this one's head was a skull that was attached to a saucer.
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“Congratulations your being rescued, please do not resist” - Khan Vibes
"I have crossed many lines to get where I am," Khan explained. "I need someone who can warn me about which ones not to cross." - CanorBrando7dComentado porTheir eyes were blue, the color of the frigid death. And their movement was that of an eerie predatorial grace. Each step left behind a mark of ice, they were quadrupedal, and on each foot, they had three toes up front and one at the back for balance, they were quite taller than a man. At least twice in height, as for the length they were more than four times that the length of a man. They were all in a hunched position as they prowled the prairies and the land.
- CanorBrando7dComentado porTheir eyes were blue, the color of the frigid death. And their movement was that of an eerie predatorial grace. Each step left behind a mark of ice, they were quadrupedal, and on each foot, they had three toes up front and one at the back for balance, they were quite taller than a man. At least twice in height, as for the length they were more than four times that the length of a man. They were all in a hunched position as they prowled the prairies and the land.
- CanorBrando7drespondió a Alduin1298
Maybe it’s regaining strength in the core of the world… using the crazed beasts as a meat blender to accumulate power. The strong go deeper and eventually feed the fallen god… the miasma is just its aura…
The man's face grimaced for a second before he took another breath and said. "We're carrying the Fallen God With us. And it already destroyed our world…" - CanorBrando7drespondió a CakeHead
Agreed… also I’d say she’s part time, she still helps the colony in retirement lol
She looks absolutely disgusted to be receiving such treatment, but there's no way they were going to let her walk. It's almost hilarious to see just how much she resents being doted on in this way. Yessssss, suffer through the indulgence, old woman! We will ensure you enjoy a long and comfortable retirement, no matter the cost! - CanorBrando7dComentado porCh 722 Last Signal