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“I angle yourself” 😆

Yeah, I get that - but did you read my comment? I’m asking, is he reincarnated into this world, or is he originally from it and it turns out that marvel also has the game ‘Valorant’

Why the fuck was his head anywhere near the mashed potatoes????

Ehh, it’s not terrible. It feels like it’s AI assisted (I mean this in a negative way, btw). Writing is okay, not many errors, but it is often repeating. The story concept itself is interesting, but I don’t think the author managed to reach the full potential of it. The pacing is quite fast and the MC’s actions would not be smart if not for the author making it the ‘right’ choice to make at the moment. Overall, wouldn’t recommend it if you want a deeper story. You don’t have to(and I don’t recommend) use your brain while reading this.

Not in this context, no

False (read the two paragraphs above)

I thought he had scars? Did they heal?

I need clarification - is Max reincarnated into Marvel? Or is he originally from marvel and there is just Valorant in universe?

Reading stories like these once in a while is really great - it really gives me confidence in my own writing ability