thats an amazing drawing!

honestly, maybe a week or so but I should be dropping two chapters

no, just editing

the drop item not the monster stone

thank you for the comment, I have fixed the editing error.

Hello, Spidercreel_ here thank you for pointing out the editing error, I have corrected it

thank you, I have fixed the error.

thank you for the kind review and pointing out the Harem tag, I apparently left it there.

loved the in depth description, your words were almost like poetry. I definitely hooked now, keep up the good work. The characters seemed well written too.

I am Harry James Potter, Lord Potter and Black, descending from the mighty Gryffindor Godric, my magic, my blood, and me merge with this sword! Turn my blood into fire, and my skin into iron: for I am the back of my sword!

thank you!!

thanks for the comment, didn't notice the mistake. hope you like the chapter!

I'm sorry to hear that. if you don't mind can you tell me went wrong in the story for you?

No, you'll find out.

yes.

I can understand that, thanks for reading anyway.

Can I ask what you mean? I felt like I portrayed the chapter well in the chapter?

yes the main pairing is NarutoxTenten, sorry.

well I kinda like harem fanfics too it's just i don't know how do them well so I don't. I know that if I try it will just bring down the entire fics overall quality which sucks I know. Sorry. I do hope you keep reading it but I understand if you don't.

it won't but I'm trying to go for a reality. People have crushes sometimes they have cruches on multiple people. Some have to sort through them. I kinda wanted that for Naruto for likes more then one girl and has to pick one... or atleast tell one how he feels.