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Just imagine flowers in the background behind him because he's handsome lol
I think for here you should change it to this because the 'and' in unnecessary. As she lurches forward, she suddenly kneels on soft grass?' Like that. The' and' makes the sentence a bit confusing so I would cut that out, if you want to, just my advice. :)
OK, the way I imagined that was coolll
Already has detail *chef's kiss*