Honestly the story’s writing and even premise is quite good, but two glaring issues lowers this novels rating quite a bit in my eyes.
1) The MC is essentially a lovestruck fool at the start with no real backbone to speak of. He throws himself into a deadly situation and is only saved by system bullshit, not to mention the “love” he feels is from when he saw those characters in the game. As in this guy legit fell in love with game characters to feel this way, and now, after being in their world, is almost fascilltating them being whisked away by the OG MC. The guys just kinda sad.
2) System punishes bim for not acting in certain ways, forces him to maintain the storyline. I hate those systems.
Maybe the MC grows over time, but I really can’t bear to read someone like that for so long. It’s a shame cause the writings so good too.