Tyrone_Robinson

“Did I ever tell you how much love mine is“ Me: that’s him officer Him: no like Minecraft Me: take him away, sir

You know only credit it if the thumb mark conditioning thing comes back after feeling to pay the toll you have been forced and conditioned by the former fuel they agreed with stone or something along those lines

As a king, I decree it discount that we may send the remainder of our stone to help rebuild the hold of Hogan

Bro you seem to be in dire need of a beta I don’t know so much about the punctuation because I’m listening to it not reading it, but I have noticed some issues with the flow

You know It’s funny to think about the original Jake being able to travel his Multiverse and then reaching the point of level 10 looking back at his journey with nostalgia, but wishing that he was there to save more people he picked up a Jake and throws him back further in the timeline with the same power set with slight changes it’s funny that we can call that rewrite but in truth it’s more a… what would we call that? timeline shenanigans? And if it is timeline shenanigans, will we get evidence at this is Canon when we reach the end of the rewrite no actually that makes it a new story not a rewrite just a self insert. Same universe, different Multiverse and probably different ways of traveling through them, lol it’s actually kind of funny to think about the idea that the First Jake wasn’t sent by a Jake, but accidentally fell into a dimensional crack and found himself inside is it wrong to pick up girls in a dungeon?

Oof right in the feels

My personal favorite was the Nightwing boy trying to prove he had a sort of spider sense but instead he pulled an ultra instinct

True but keep in mind his sister wants to survive the backlash honestly, I don’t know why he kept her in the same town maybe it was because of pride but really

Curses the Lord noticed that somehow Helga got rebuilt quickly before your get captured use your destruction technique through the shiny stone

No, my dude, you have to understand that the real PowerPlay here was actually the juggernaut drive. The possibility of tipping him into that while his beloved sister was in range West probably clouding his judgment.