TheAldrich

This story is getting so dumb, everyone has a low iq.

Very boring, now he has a stupid fairy thats acting like a kid too..

The story starts well with a cool main character that does some badass things. However after a while he gets entangled with idiotic females and it just becomes a dumb song and dance every chapter. The book is about an assassin, not about all these people that keep hanging on the MC's feet. Quite boring even though it had potential. 3/5

U need a nice warm cup of green tea sir. Please calm down with these ideas.

Literally the same as little queen.. [img=faceslap]

To add to this; the MC has pork, meat in addition to many other types of food have natrium inside then already. Adding more is usually not needed at all unless its because you want to adjust the flavour with it as a type of spice.

It's good for a healthy diet. Natrium is needed, but it's not a must like the mc describes.

Honest review here. There are alot of errors in this novel. The story itself may be good, sadly its glory has yet to show due to this issue. Every time I open a new chapter i get bombarded by mistake after mistake. I suggest getting someone to proof read chapters or edit them. The potential is there. Sadly basic understanding of the English language is letting this novel down.

A silence is only awkward if you make it awkward.

Ah nice, a fresh mtl novel. Oh wait, it's also about pet beasts? 😴😴