Ah i think i understand what you mean, the narration/monolog shouldnt be directed at an unseen audience but instead used to further the MC's thoughts and understanding. That's fair, i dislike when MCs are 'talking' to the readers via thoughts as a shtty way to advance the plot. Still an odd take that its 'white authors' instead of just talentless web writers

This chapter was 90% cringe. Cut back on the blushing and stuttering ffs, its downgrading the novel and makes the MC out to be disgustingly pathetic.

Kind of stupid arent you

Slater found his balls, nice

never forget

There's yuri? thanks for the warning bro

Welp, at least my second favorite will keep getting updated. (prince of hades)

No gym or conference challenges? Yeah, I'll stop reading

Slept on this novel to stock up chapters, then it got rewritten. So... Allons-y

No idea, dropped it in the early 20s

Haki, galaxy impact and 6 powers, id consider a power up. Im 12 chaps in, when is bro going to stop babysitting and shoving gifts at everyone that happens to breathe in his general direction and go do pokemon trainer stuff? Like gym battles and conferences? He's more of a delibird than anything at this point.

Lets go! Tyrunt goated

Jurassic park trilogy