MokouFriedChicken
Just another random voice with crappy wrists on the interwebs. I promise nothing and deliver even less.
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Well, that was pretty exciting. I've written in this genre myself, and I have a lot to learn from your work. From the way you build the world, to the way you weave the tension and mystery, it's really top-notch. Dialogue flows well too, with minimal grammar mistakes. Then again, that's really nitpicking. Keep on writing
Thanks for the review. Hope I won't dissapoint moving forward.
It's pretty well written. Writing is solid, as well as prose and dialogue. Everything flows smoothly enough, and the characters are likeable. Keep on writing.