Nth

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

The story is interesting but the pace is too slow. Too many paragraphs are wasted on random bystander's comments about the MC. It's not uncommon to have half a chapter or more spent on explaining bystanders view. The pace is too slow for my liking

I don't even know what I am reading anymore

Great story. But I feel like too many paragraphs are wasted on fleshing out the bystander's reaction leading to the story becoming stretched out and repetitive .

😒

Another person has volunteered to die filled with regrets

He was able to use the white Fluid to create more copies of the pill. So, is there something that prevents him from scanning the fruit and producing more copies of it?

Wind snake?!!

Meloneon

Instead, he was a half baked tier 2 mage ...