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I'm a guy who's new to writing and has a few idea's for stories and I hope that over time I get better at writing/stories ideas and will be able to get a good community who read my story's .
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fixed it thanks [img=recommend]
that's the time dilation, which was just for the beginning that over now the only thing that doesn't change is the candidates who will still be physically the same after the game is over. As for the review, I knew this was a problem about 40 chapters in. But I enjoyed writing, so I just went on ahead. Luckily, I can just be lazy and say that 10 years went by, and nothing happened. This is gonna be a big novel that needs a lot of cleaning up. Luckily, some of this stuff won't be around for long. Thanks for reading as well.
I don't know about popularity, maybe because some people do things to increase popularity as I just upload it here and on Royal Road. But as for your review, thank you. I appreciate it, and you should try writing if you want to. I'm not special, and I'm happy with how this novel has gone so far, so just give it a try.
so I a rixis goes out and kills an animal for food every day that no points given put if it makes a big discovery. Or fights a strong monster from outside rixis lands, then it will get points for the hunting side. it's more the risk factor that gets you points.
yeah, I'd rather you do. I'm not perfect, and I use grammarly, but some things still slip past, so thank you. If you do, it only makes the work better.
thanks fixed it 👍
fixed it thanks.
correct, so they are very close. There is another that is close aswell but they will have at least a few biomes in between them. they'll start appearing more in chapters once the tribal stage is over. That's when candidates start battling and scheming.
1. yes, they would be raised if they were killed after the undead appeared, not before. 2. there are multiple native tribes and this is a spoiler, but kingdoms, but I'm keeping those for once. Jack reaches that stage, which will be very soon.
yeah, but I guess they're evil because there are those who aren't religious who don't attack those who are. while those seen as evil actively destroy and ruin everything they can.
New race without any skills or time to evolve and get stronger and is similar to human life spans of the time before modern medicine.