Thanks for the gift

It's more like his body adjusted after he moved

That's true. Although in this case their propose here is not to be meat shields but to do the grunt work after the five have cast their massive spell.

nah villain lol

Lol, sorry bout the mistakes, it clearly bothers you. I'll try going back to do some corrections.

Hi, if you like the book please recommend it to others. thanks

no, just a lot

Lol, you're looking for realism in a fantasy book. It's okay if you think this is for children. There's no need to force yourself to read it. Thanks for your input

Lol, have you ever been to war. Much less one in a fantasy world?

Intriguing storyline, nice plot and characters. All in all, this is a good novel, good work.

Great book, the idea behind it is interesting and the plot is engaging, good work.

Great story and excellent writing structure, thus book has a ton of potential. Theres's still a lot a lot of things left out of the world building though but all in all great book.

yea

Is there something you didn't like, since you gave me 4.5 stars

Nice story. Poor Tom can't catch a break. Well at least thing are looking up.

The story itself is interesting but the execution needs a bit more work. Still, good novel

Ofv

yes

Not completely... This is only my opinion but I feel you just need to occasionally move away from a characters's perspective and describe the situation around them to make not feel like a collection of perspectives on a dairy

The story itself is interesting and the plot is great but i find myself getting put off by writing style. Maybe that's just not my preference but it almost seemed as though i was reading a diary instead of a novel. Lol, not that I'm any better tbh. Keep up the good work and continue to improve.