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amaturewriter2yrrespondió a Chris_Matteboruto-shinki
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imo...visually one of the coolest MA's in fiction and also is as OP as it is nerfed. user could've been an easy kenshiro, especially with x ray eyes
The Eight Trigrams are not just one technique; there are more than 10 Eight Trigram moves, Eight Trigrams Palms Revolving Heaven, Eight Trigrams Sixteen Palms, Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Palms, and so on and so forth. - amaturewriter2yrrespondió a JiyuYami
again...its a power or an adjective...not a name. do you not know the difference between an adjective and a noun? for all I care , u can name ur MC tall man D Rui. ur ff, ur choice. just remember its stupid. limitless. D. rui??? either way I dont want to continue this. just thought u should know that using an Adjective for a name is stupid.
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no one uses an adjective as a name. Limitless is not a name for a character. it can be an epithet, nickname. for ex: most fanfics, I've often seen call shanks:- Shanks le roux [ or rouge? - something like that ] or just akagami no shanks or shanks...its a nickname. red hair shanks isnt his name. lol.
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*as in fanfics
2 - Zoan: Zoan literally translated as Animal System is a type of Devil Fruit that allows its user to transform into an animal or hybrid at will. Zoan type fruits are divided into sometimes very rare subcategories - amaturewriter2yrrespondió a JiyuYami
no. out of the 1000's of logia and paramcia..less than 100 . not used at all, these fruits
2 - Zoan: Zoan literally translated as Animal System is a type of Devil Fruit that allows its user to transform into an animal or hybrid at will. Zoan type fruits are divided into sometimes very rare subcategories - amaturewriter2yrrespondió a amaturewriter
no hard feelings.
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An adjective for a name is stupid. at least choose it in the form of another language latin/greece/japanese/ engrish? idk etc. or make it a nickname..like shanks.
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OP but tbh, overrated.
3 - Logia: Logia , literally translated as System Nature (Shizenkē) is a type of devil fruit that gives its user the power to take the form of a natural element, to produce and control it at will. Logia-type devil fruits are considered the most powerful (they make the user untouchable) and the least common of the three types of devil fruits. - amaturewriter2yrComentado por
train and become OP or get lucky and become a god
2 - Zoan: Zoan literally translated as Animal System is a type of Devil Fruit that allows its user to transform into an animal or hybrid at will. Zoan type fruits are divided into sometimes very rare subcategories - amaturewriter2yrComentado por
The "MVP's" of DF
1 - Paramecia: Paramecia , Paramishia) literally translated as Superhuman System is a type of Devil Fruit that gives users a "superhuman" power that can affect the body, manipulate the body . environment or produce any substance. Paramecias are the most common fruits on the Grand Line and in the world. - amaturewriter2yrComentado por
*exciting *than my
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*it?
The world he's living in now is called… well, he doesn't have a name, so that makes it easier. - amaturewriter2yrrespondió a amaturewriterAt some places of his body, like elbows, knees, and neck, the flesh under his skin was visible as his thick skin was already burned. After all, plasma is hot. As hot as Kaido's heat breath which can literally destroy mountains.
- amaturewriter2yrComentado porAt some places of his body, like elbows, knees, and neck, the flesh under his skin was visible as his thick skin was already burned. After all, plasma is hot. As hot as Kaido's heat breath which can literally destroy mountains.
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dude....what u did here is pretty dope. I assume u made this language? amazing, I like it. but man looking at every paragraph comment to understand whats going on just ruins the reading experience. just pulls u out of the moment and to do this every paragraph isnt something most people would bother. And in phones I am not sure if u can even look at the paragraph comment, that isnt possible [ not sure about the app]. and going back and forth to understand whats going on....just no try to just put the meaning next to ur language instead of the paragraph comment ex: "Naola.Parien?" { where are the plains? } -something like this
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*how
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would be perfect. same ambitions and mindset. just be better
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