KingSeshy

thanks it means a lot!

Shameless review by the author. However, I will take criticism and any advice to heart and try to work on any serious shortcomings I have as a writer. Please comment!

Yeah, I know. It's a story, I didn't want to write a health guide and villagers wouldn't understand the intricacies of modern day health without long paragraphs of writing and boring explanations.

thank you!

thank you I'll change it now :)

what is this?

I also currently have 8 draft chapters waiting to be released and in the drafts he has just begun the training.

You can't train your chakras until you're 18 and he is 16 so the only training he is capable of doing right now is for his body and martial arts. Right now the mc is working on his martial arts as well so people don't figure out that he's not the same genius he used to be. He's going to be training and making connections in the beginning of the story.

I write quickly because I'm very busy with a job and also university. If you have any suggestions please let me know. I write on the fly so any criticism is welcome. If you find any grammar or spelling errors just leave a comment notifying me and I'll fix it.

Yes, this is what I thought as well and I plan to flesh out the female romance partners but there probably won't be too many of them. The main amount of females I want that romantically influence the mc is around 3, I don't want to throw around too many.