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Excuse me for what I said about the story that was falling apart but literally there are too many descriptions tries to make more history and less descriptions, but the descriptions from where there were few are becoming more and more, it seems that the story is full of extensions per chapter The problem is not only justice but things in general, that is, that I care about the right and wrong in a story, I follow the main character for the story not for the countless implications of how it can be a slope that grows in the protagonist of morality or other things, and please do not open the protagonist already at the beginning, we have not even reached the world war the universe has not been open, the dimensions have not manifested themselves every day, the multiverse has not risked extinction every hour, that is, in a nutshell we are still at the beginning of Marvel

Ave

Thanks for ch, author can mc go into mephist daughter,

honestly author even if the story is beautiful it's going to pieces if continue like this, from the premise of the beautiful girls, fun and entertainment it's changed to combat, training, descriptions and things about justice. the story has too many descriptions but too many, the story itself is short you're just adding descriptions to increase the chapter making the story itself short, abilities like eldritch abomination are too op already to make the system seem useless, the story progresses too slowly in some aspects and too fast in others, then dracula even if it seems op and everything else is barely building level a bomb powerful enough can severely damage him, mc as idiot as he was he should understand the importance of firearms, then try to make the story more balanced and fast we haven't even reached the captain america period and there are already all these problems, at least before publishing try to reread the chapter there are too many extensions with the description too many, just because they fight doesn't mean that for every moment I have to understand every detail said and repeated several times about justice and intentions because it's becoming ugly to read,

Raven have like 700 years

Well now i think thats it

How is call new novel?

not bad but piccolo's power-up doesn't make sense dragonball powers increase geometrically through who is close to you and who is your teacher, you train with someone and together you reach high levels, someone strong teaches you it is easier to reach that level, or being a rival of someone or aiming to defeat someone helps you become stronger, vegeta became strong only because he exploited goku otherwise he wouldn't even have reached super saiyan

Thx for ch

Thanks for ch but you stop at best part c.c