Good story i read next charapter too and guys you dont lose nothing because story become cultivation novel with chinese mythology[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Good ch next please

This egg is majin bu

Beutiful story🥲🥲🥲

Good ch continue

If you find a ff like this tell me please

Next????

great ideas but bad execution, the first chapters were fine then they were just time jumps and a small summary explaining what happened, no conversation or detailed explanation it seems like the story is a summary because there are moments where you skip the story too much, shin who can kill Freezer with a finger is declared slightly stronger than Freezer, the ki that increases as if there were no end without a gravity chamber or anything else in short full of plot holes

More please also if mc let ah yin see his son is died and sameone take his soul is better also let ah yin see tang hao know his son is died but accept him because have 2 martial spirit

Isnt so bad

Author next????

every ninja's upper limit is set from birth no amount of training can solve the problem, training can help you unlock your potential but you will be limited, iruka is a genin instead itachi is as strong as a kage, birth determines talent if you want to be stronger, in addition to chakra control, you need physical training but don't think about rock lee or obito they are different! one uchiha the other only has physical talent and doesn't reach gai level and hasn't even learned jutsu because it was denied so he only has exhausting physical training without jutsu, instead mental energy trains with knowledge, yin chakra and special techniques the same type, meditation (but not like a monk but focused meditation like leaf training), chakra control, senjutsu and elemental knowledge like naruto did for rasenshuriken. the body must also have adequate nutrients and medicines otherwise training does more harm than good and some special physical techniques need secret herbs such as choji

Rasenshuriken is just rasengan with wind chakra Also naruto have 1k year he is reincarnation of asura and he is literally jesus of naruto, also if isnt for kurama give problem with chakra control and asura he still can reach a power beyond kage (look naruto film when they go to another world and memna is naruto without asura chakra) Also Rasenshuriken ia master when isnt master even at end of shippuden he only become so strong for ignore effect

Next please

Big flaw Why he want all magic easy? Maybe he go in cultivation world or other world with different power system and his wish be useless

I doubt serena god alterady become a god of ishigar or get 7 lacrima at this time

Hades isnt dead??

This gif

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Good ch, please continue