HangerBaby

I wanted to read it even if it was just an AI story but it doesn't seem like the author is proofing anything so there are serious flaws in the story telling. That's to be expected though as I doubt anyone that's lazy enough to use AI to write their story is going to actually proof anything

How? He doesn't know anything about the One Piece world.

You're using AI and it shows. Little mistakes like saying Luffy's home was Alabasta. You should stop or do a better job proof reading

I have family I love so yeah, but I wouldn't stay. Just visit

Gotta go back and fix it again. Shanks says he is going to recruit Yassop at the end of the chapter right before he leaves

No it doesn't. If you can't kill to protect someone you love, like your family. Do you really love them? Deep down do you actually care? If someone can say they won't kill someone even with a gun pointed at their loved one as an ultimatum then I don't think they actually live them

I seriously have a problem with this mentality. He killed a serial grapist and murder that could never be redeemed. Why do people think it's possible to come back from that? Even in our world people this that such sick individuals can be fixed when they should be put down. You don't deserve a second chance after stuff like thag

That is a stupid mentality to have. If Garp hadn't been there and that pirate hadn't been messing around Ace and Luffy would have been dead before Marcus ever had a chance to step in.

That's sad. Truly sad. I would do anything to protect my family. Anyone who says different doesn't deserve their family

Wait does his previous world have 0 crime? Cause I know our world has true monsters in it