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red is too much, purple sounds good. If not possible then blue.

I am also very satisfied with this 1th volume. And I think you should at least include some poetry since it fits perfectly with his nature of an ancient cultivator. He might still be a child sometimes, but it would give his character a bit more depth. Will the next vol. be a new Fanfic or will you put everything in this one? Anyway, I am looking forward to the next chapters

Your Translation was very good. But where can I find the vol. 2 ???

So she was too late the last time And that's why she is so afraid of the Tsaritza...

hahahaha, I nearly fell over when imagining McGonagall's face

It's not bad but I wish you would give the reader a definitive warning when your MC is genderfluid. If your synopsis is about a boy it gives me the creeps if he changes within 5 chapters into a girl and stays that way. I would find it acceptable if automatically changed back to his Assassin form after the fights are over...

glad your healthy now. I am looking forward to new chapters.

I think you are portraying the other gods as too weak. Please don't Forget they do have those terrifying beeings like Tiamat and Anu. Also EA is weapon that should be cabable of destroying stars Just saying. But still I really like how Lucifer is interacting with different mythologies and am very Looking Forward how this Story continues. Keep going, your doing a good Job. :)