CapaxInfiniti

I don't really care about the usage or not usage of skills so long as it makes sense story-wise and character-wise. What bothers me is repeated things like skills or if you repeat something several times in a single chapter. Another thing that bothers me is if a character isn't supposed to be stupid but repeatedly does stupid things. I have to say Satou has done many of those things up to where I stopped reading. One of my biggest issues with the story is with the usage or lack of usage of the Devour ability. I don't know if it was a choice or you were blind to things but the issues up to where I stopped were genuinely starting to really annoy the shit out of me. Where I stopped Satou was only really starting to begin using it mid combat. That was literally thought number one for me ( at least when it was changed to spatial devouring ). Also around where I stopped you only then started using the devour ability on inanimate things like ground etc etc. That was literally thought number 2 for me. That's just 2 things of many that you got issues with logically and structurally in my eyes. Sorry went on a bit of a rant there. I only get annoyed like this when I see potential for fun stories and the author drops the ball in some way.

Did he say this or did he think this author? For cryin out loud, man...

Just in case someone is doubtful that there's more in this one single chapter. 22 is NOT late twenties like is stated in this chapter.

What a rough start... I'm not talking about the story. I'm talking about the poor writing. There's a very big difference between IN and ON. Guy magically suddenly has a rucksack and a toaster in it? The cops are poorly written. This is real rough. You'll need to do something remarkable in the next chapter or two to keep me around.

Author really needs to work on structuring and logical thought process. "Malakor sent no message, but Lord Loki says that silence from the first seat is actually approval. He doesn’t comment on those he considers beneath notice." Approval = silence But silence = "beneath notice"

This is remarkably bad. It's rare you come across something so poorly written. Maybe I'm picky about my ero stories but I am not ever suggesting anyone to read this. Normally I give stories more than just one chapter but this is just so damn flat that I won't give it more time than I already have.

This is real rough man. The first 30 chapters are a complete cluster f*ck. Unless the writing improves incredibly dramatically very very quickly I cannot suggest this to anyone. The lewd isn't great. The character development is very poor. The characters are all incredibly shallow. There is a ton of real rough logic throughout all that I've read so far. Maybe I'll come back to this after a long time. Who knows. I've been on a string of trash story after trash story that all somehow have high ratings and so maybe this story just had some pieces that ended up being "the straw that broke the camels back". I will say the MC is very very hard to like so maybe this isn't that straw and instead just something I dislike quite a bit. Time will tell.

This is rough. Like it could have been really fun but... there's a bunch one can complain about. This is yet another MC that is supposed to be a genius and yet because the author themselves isn't super smart or clever they fail at making the MC a genius. Just so I'm clear here. This is not me name calling the author anything. I understand what I'm saying can come across that way so I just want to be clear. The limit of what a character can be is the limit at what its creator can reach. With that said another aspect of the MC I find annoying is he is like... evil... for the sake of being evil? That reasoning is so damn boring in all honesty.

There's a ton that's.... off with this. In general it might have been a fun story if it were an entirely different author writing lol. The main character is a moron. The way the author writes it's like the person genuinely believes in Alpha male and Beta male bullsh*t. Either the author or translator( idk which it is in this story) but there are things that are just abruptly changed as if it was a poor translation or bad writing. This story MC is like trying to be edgy for the sake of being edgy but just comes across as a loser.