Jims_Rid

this was a masterpiece of a chapter

don't worry about it. it feels shorter not because you're not good enough but because your work is so good that we can't help but want more

but hey, your fanfic is really good!

just a suggestion but the rivalry between Itachi and Ken would be more intense if Ken isn't always on the winning side

Naruto with Gamabunta vs Gaara and Shukaku. Gamabunta had trouble holding Shukaku in place so he asked Naruto's assistance in using Transformation jutsu so that he could have claws.

Author, you did a good job. I have a suggestion though. I noticed that everything so far has been under control. Every impossible moment, the MC has a sure fire way to survive so while he has been put under pressure, he hasn't overcome any impossible moment so far so it might be a good idea to let the mc experience moments of desperation. His fighting style makes it so that he can be aggressive and retreat all the time so I understand that it would be difficult to put the MC in that kind of situation unless he's facing the likes of Nagato, Obito, and Madara. I would say that your work is one of the best fanfics so far, on par with Outsider's resolve but as long as you can pull it off with another character or characters other than Itachi madara obito nagato or even reanimated hashirama or minato, I would say that your work would be the best so far. But it's okay since your work is still one of the best so far. Anyway, it's just a suggestion

you can also do hybrid. upload one at a time and then when you find yourself busy and tired, you can also upload all three chaps at once.

3 chapters per week at once sounds good for you, you get more rest and all while one chapter a time is good for the book. Uploading one at a time will keep your readers hooked up more, you'll find more discussions per chapter. What happens when you upload chapters all at once is that you'll find all the discussions on the last chapter. Readers will usually visit the book once per week. Which means less discussions and votes. Uploading one at a time makes it so that there will be more discussions and visits to the book every week. more visits = more votes and more popularity.

It's not much but take my coins!

thanks for the chap!