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The idea is that the power depends on how the characteristic acquired is used, I think that in the novel it is more or less understood that it is not a super power without a reason behind it so it really depends on the possibilities and how it is used.
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To be honest, I always wanted to finish my stories, but when I started writing, I was studying medicine, and time was not my ally, then when I planned to continue, I went back and reread the story, I didn't know how to continue it, I like to write, I do it as a hobby, and I regret every day not having continued my stories, I want to finish this one, and continue the previous ones, now that I have more time, I hope to be able to do it, and if I plan to write this one and finish it
I greatly appreciate the reporting of any errors in writing, I will work hard to improve these errors.
I understand the point, and I see the same problem, however, I am trying to create a somewhat long prologue that explains the things that will happen next, I apologize if the story is somewhat boring and monotonous, but personally I like information and justifying the why of things, therefore I feel that the beginning is necessary for the story.
Well, I think that facing the situation that Alex finds himself in, most human beings would be in a similar position, on the other hand Ariel is an AI with logical thinking, always opting for the efficiency of doing her job, although my idea is to develop Alex as a protagonist, it is something that I feel should take its time and events, if you like the story I ask you to give it a chance and then indicate whether or not you like the continuity of the story.
I apologize if there are any repetition issues in the editing, my native language is not English and I use external help, from now on I plan to implement new measures to avoid this type of errors.
You're right, but that only applies to a fight of strength, remember that William comes from a modern world, with another way of seeing the world, maybe it's a mistake or maybe not, we'll see what happens.
Thank you very much for the correction, English is not my native language.
I appreciate the comment, I apologize for not uploading more chapters, I have been busy with university exams, I hope to catch up on the weekend.