rewrite or just small edits?

its sad how little a good reputation is actually worth considering that a random person that is loud enough can destroy it completely without the other person being able to defend themselves. way too many lifes get destroyed by baseless rumours and accusations.

he needs a reason for the discrimination arc of the story. a reason to give the mc trouble at each step he takes.

the problem is that someone could choose a "punishment" as reward or something that can't easily transferred. for example if someone wishes as reaard that someone else dies or gets cursed, what part of that reward will he get? or if someone cursed/mind controlled wishes to die, does he then die too? dose he get injured/weakened instead? it is always better to restrict wishes like that behind additional choices and conditions.

well not quite. he should have set limits to it like that the reward can't hurt, curse, weaken or negatively influence him. or to make it easier, him being able to refuse rewards that he doesn't like.

he has such a hight mana capacity and regen. why isn't he converting that into spirit qi? it would be way less destructive to the surroundings.

ups. welp thats it.

it can be worse punishment than a death sentence.

but that ruines way too much of the meat...

making chocolate is one of the recipes where i wonder how they figured it out. it has many very specific steps.

there are many different types of that instrument. so im not surprised that the improvised version resembles another one. also xylophone and glockenspiel look almost the same.

yeah he is in copium denial. also we can't forget that dhe is currently just 14 so it isn't that surprising that he isn't asking directly.

the worst villains are the heroes. the only difference between an hero and villain is from what perspective you look at that person. especially fantasy heroes have often higher kill rates than the villains they fight against.

my guess is that it is an academy for a school ark.

well you could argue that its the systems fault. it even took pp from him for it, so it should have known that it is the safest and easiest to upgrade the chaos first. that said it is probably an excuse of a technicality in his wording or so.

yeah i wonder when he will get the remaining body talents that he is still missing

this comment section is the funniest crap i have read in a long time. you all know that there are cultures where a quick hug and kiss is a normal greeting between friends. its not like she is fully making out with that guy to test her powers or kissing him multiple times. not every culture has kissing as more sacred than seeing the other gender in underwear.

im surprised that there isn't a limit. the space should become unstable with so many space rings close together.

there was no notification that it went up. it seems that the heavens didn't find it worthy enough to pay even more attention than it already did.

it seems that i missed a typo in the past. it is bad and not bald. bad capitalism is one that is build on the idea of debt like the one we currently have.