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I was expecting more of a vengeful perspective, as written in the synopsis. But this is fine as well! Maybe he'll have his vengeful thoughts later on?

Yeah, that's what I was thinking too. If she found out that she was being seemingly deceived by Zen, then who's to say she isn't being deceived again by those who told her about the Pills thing?

I was gonna say this on Discord, but I can't dm you now, but anyway: I've only read up to chapter 2, my bad xd don't worry, I'll give my review once I've read enough chapters.

Dang, a very angry stepfather. It seems the stepmother is kindhearted though.

Short and eventful chapter. I don't even what the queen was thinking. Actually, why would the king marry someone like her xd

Thank you for reading and reviewing, I agree there are improvements to be made! And they will be coming... when I have free time xd I put a lot of stuff in the foreshadowing and symbolism, so if you have any theories, feel free to share them!

I like the cosmic lore. I like it when someone nerds out to the point that they created whole worlds, systems, and religions. It feels nice reading something with that much effort. In the first chapter, we get a helpful serving of our protagonist's personality xd and damn he's emo and depressing. But we get to see why. We also see the setting, the protag's situation, and the people around him. Most things that were described had purpose, to illustrate what the protag feels and how he reacts to memories. That's great, because sometimes, authors describe so much about something without actually saying anything. Interested to see how this story unfolds.

Oh, welp. There's the foreshadowing's punchline xd

Whooo. Didn't "The Amazing Spiderman'd" this.

Suzuki? Car? So... this a mix of fantasy and reality? xd