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I usually don't summarize a fanfic without reading 100 chapters first, but in this case I make an exception, the secondary characters have their time which is good, we see a Harry with the 3 dark, gray and white facets, and the cherry on the cake he is crazy this brings a distinction over other HP fanfics, a good description of the world, a good development of characters, and as the world is a mix of several works I think it has a lot of potential, the fanfic has very good writing and grammar. I highly recommend reading it!!! I leave my wish to the author that, if he could put Tiamat (dxd) and/or Irene Belserion (Fairy Tail) as his wife, it could be both or one of them, a dragon wife, a very interesting series lol
I just read chapter 50, I think at this point I can do a basic and shallow review of the story. To begin with, I would like to talk about the development of the story so far and it is very good, the author explores Whitebeard's abilities and powers a lot, in addition to the development of the characters, especially Jason's partners, and I like how things are slow and rhythmic, and positive points for Jason's behavior, he has a lot of charisma lol. Of course, I think the story needs editing. From what I've read, there are a lot of misspelled words and no context, making it difficult to understand the story itself, but nothing that would make you give up because of that, and I hope that in the chapters ahead and in the next releases it will be better written. So it's a 5 star.
Thanks for the chapter, receive all my stones lol, one of the best fanfics out there, now just wait for more chapters huhuu
Thanks for the chapter, I would like to ask if there is a list of the harem available, the harem route is very difficult to believe due to the protagonist's behavior, and I hope to see more sugar interaction between them lol
wonderful, I like how the story is developing and how the protagonist's persona is, the way he thinks, the story is just beginning but it's worth reading, I had some laughs, of course I hope the author doesn't forget the characters he's collecting, especially the wives lol, they're missing a little screen time, but I think that could change as the fanfic progresses.
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Good chapters autor san