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If it is indeed "lightning", then the greater irony would be the fact that members of the family of Zeus (the Thunderer) are killed by lightning.
A very important description that changes the view of his power.
Awesome chapter!
Yasaka was added to the harem of one of the clients, not the MC. At least, that's what it was heading towards.
Well, as I said, I envy you that you don't see this. There is no point in repeating my arguments any more, if you didn't get my point and what exactly confuses me, then I don't think that additions will fix it. We remain with our opinion. Happy Reading!
It becomes noticeable that you are clearly not reading with your eyes. In my previous comment it was written "(I know that she is supposedly at the champion level)". Did MC know about this? For him it was a "random" battle. In a random arena with a "random" challenger.
I tell you "the earth is dry", you answer me "the sky is clear". Your arguments are that the fact of constant growth of the surrounding coaches is a plus, but in general I have no complaints about this. I even stated earlier that I am in favor of this with all my hands! The complaints are that initially the MC was prescribed too strong starting conditions and his reputation was inflated. If the MC was in the same starting conditions as the average person, there would be no problems at all and it would really be realistic and interesting. But when the MC is first prescribed a bunch of skills in the story and before sending him out into the world, he was given a funny kick for motivation, and then they are dumped on a random guy (I know that she is supposedly at the level of a champion) who is the same age as him, but does not have even half of his starting conditions, then you ask yourself why the hell is the MC in this story? When logic suffers, this is not realistic at all. This is a Nerf for the sake of "plot". If you don't see it, or it's not that critical for you, then I even envy you, since the first hundred and fifty chapters of the fanfic were one of the best in the Pokemon setting. Again, I probably would have overcome myself and continued reading, but the fact that the reputation of the MC "invincibility" was inflated, tying up several interesting plot flags, and then thrown into the trash can with his "defeat", and in such a way that the plot flags are no longer subject to restoration by any logic, finally kills all the enthusiasm. Even without plot flags, if we are talking about such a thing as a character's reputation of "invincibility", either we stick to it until the very end within the framework of the plot (or at least prepare a decent scene for defeat, and not like in fan fiction - a completely random arena for battles, a completely random opponent that even the viewers may not have heard of), or we do not initially inflate it so much that it would not disappoint the readers so much. This is already a claim to a purely literary move.
Yeah, and mix the concept of Arceus' champion with shit. If random trainers are so strong, why the hell did Arceus bother with isekai? He could have given the task to a local with such potential and the job was done. Then I wouldn't have any complaints about the "nerf".
You have an interesting "opinion" that starts with the rudeness of "Continue being irritated then". In any case, I am not against difficulties in the story, but it should be presented competently, increasing the significance of each victory. And not like at the beginning of the story, in the lore of the MC, they write grandiose abilities and skills and inflate his reputation to stratospheric heights, and then they merge it with a bunch of no-names, which nullify all his achievements. Although I admit that I was also offended by the exorbitantly inflated reputation of the MC, on which many plot moves were based, and then bam and a public defeat, which logically should ruin all these plot moves irrevocably simply because the exorbitantly inflated reputation of the MC did not justify itself.
Do you feel better? Go ahead and read on.