I like so many things about this story, but the flighty nature priests are absolutely hilarious!

No

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Which is a pinky and the brain reference…

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I like the story so far, but you only need to use boost once or boostx10 or something…it doesn’t sound great on audio…

Great chapter! Not killing Mundi was the right decision, even if Plo needed to point it out. I like how he is still struggling for balance as it is so rare in the lore. It would be impossible to achieve in 2 years. If he was truly balanced, he would realize that keeping Mundi alive would get him and the Jedaii more in the end.

Not a hard one to guess… though not sure how guys wearing bulky power armor could reach behind their back much at all…

In any other universe, this amount of resources and cheat codes would be a massive overkill. It’s amusing how even with all the OP rewards and accumulated strength talked about, I’m like…yeah that’s barely enough to turn the tides.

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The heart is weird for 40K…even if you go female route

Overall, a perfect Segway while honoring the magnitude of the Battle of Terra without getting bogged down in the mess of the books.

Awesome summation chapter! I think you handled this perfectly balancing League’s efforts while keeping the fateful ends. It makes the next 40K arc very fresh while easier to tweak into what you’ve been prepping for. Looking forward to it as you are easily my favorite 40K FF out there. I’m not a lore expert, but I think Sanguinius’s stasis is new and an interesting twist. Even if it is canon, the reference gives me hope that Alex will do his system magic and bring him back to the party.

Thanks for the chapter, but a serious cliff left…

+1. I would try to establishing them as a faction within the Republic meant to defend outer rim from the rising chaos first before any leaving of the republic. Then leave during the clone wars while allying against the cis. That last part needs work on the details, tho

Side note, I’ve been playing rogue trader and having a MHA cRPG would be cool!

💯 looking forward to how you work the chess pieces into hero fights. I know he’ll hide a certain amount of his power for story reasons and hidden cards in the future, but even a downgraded version would be super fun!

She’s my favorite side character! Always the best troll!

So many are dropped that I lost count…please don’t drop 🥲

If you decide to use multiple RWBY teams,I would select your favorite one or two RWBY teams and roll with them. There were too many, and it seemed like you were using them to stall for time. I say that, but I have trouble narrowing it down. Using the kid and negative teams as comic relief the same way would be a still great add IMO. Negative team trying and failing to steal stuff would be a funny scene, maybe having the kid team puppy-eyes them into rethinking life. Then return them to their worlds. Original team would be kinda amusing to see his world, then want their world back. I think saving grimm team and revealing his altruistic side so the other teams trust him past his villain identity in DC. I’m very “meh” on the hero team. You may hate this, but having the other RWBY teams convince him to mend his relationship with the Justice League would be so on brand, especially for Ruby.