Emilly_y

a copy of a copy, honestly after seeing several novels with the same script I no longer know which is the original and which was the copy, they managed to get to the point of that phrase "which came first, the chicken or the egg"

In 5 chapters you discover that the characters are fools, idiots and selfish. I will never be able to empathize with a character who abandons his own family, his own mother, to survive. Regardless of the next chapters and how much effort the author made to write this, it's still not worth putting his character to the test.

I would like to agree with you but this novel is different, at least until the moment I read it. I'm in chapter 101 and if you read up to this point you will understand that so far the novel involves a lot of psychological vision, for example in chapter 101 we see how much the Yu brothers were psychologically manipulated by Yu Miao, of course these brothers are fools which made it easier but this It made the novel very interesting with several psychological views of why the characters act like this, even Yu Su herself admits that in her past life she was foolish and manipulated by Yu Miao. I think the author's only mistake was that he added this more psychological plot as he wrote because if you go back to the initial 40 chapters it seems like it would follow the plot you described but as the novel progresses he adds these elements which improves a lot and diverts completely what you describe. In the last few months I've been watching a lot of neuroscience and psychology content so I was surprised that I randomly picked up a novel that has a plot of psychological manipulation. And before you say that Yu Su is just stupid for caring about her family, then I ask is It's possible for you to even care about criminals according to Stockholm Syndrome, so because someone with the psychological profile of Yu Su shown so far can't continue loving their family, there are fools for everything. Finally, psychology is strange and intriguing.

I was just looking for something with cultivation and system so I don't mind harem but I only saw people praising the author for the writing so I would like to ask if the author is deleting bad reviews? Because if someone reads the first chapters they will realize that the characters are superficial and the conversations are simple, for example the protagonist wakes up with a little girl doing that and he doesn't show much emotion and when he realizes the system it's more as if it were common and normal for him to have a system, I know he knows people with power but his reactions and speeches are like a robot, I didn't check when this novel started to be released but it seems to be written by an artificial intelligence, anyone who has seen novels written by AI will find similarities in character descriptions and conversations. A rating of 4.85 is really doubtful if there is no cheating, unfortunately anything goes for money until it tricks people who just want to enjoy a good work instead of putting in the effort to write something good.

1. Comedy is bad and forced, 70% of novels that have a comedy tag don't know how to manage it well, an example of a novel that worked well with comedy is "One Word Changed, Characters in Chaos", read and compare to see what it's like the comedy is smoother and it doesn't feel too forced. That's why I think it's risky to include comedy because people like or don't like forced comedy, and many of the people who liked it will end up getting bored after 500 chapters or more, that's what I noticed in most people. 2. The MC system is too op. He learns everything the system offers without actually accumulating knowledge about cultivation, I read a novel of the same type a few weeks ago and the mc was able to understand cultivation and explain it to other people as he got stronger, the mc wasn't so dependent of the system, for example he did not need the system to learn simple techniques because the knowledge he accumulated with the help of the system meant that he no longer needed the support of the system itself. Furthermore, as long as the MC has system points, he does not lack energy in combat. There are other minor bad points in the novel but for this type of novel we can ignore it, a lot of people say that it gets better later on but if someone needs to force themselves to read 100, 200, 300 chapters waiting for this improvement it's not worth it, unless you have time in life, so I recommend reading it.

You are right but wrong at the same time. The mc has no character evolution, I read up to chapter 257 and you can see that the secondary characters are changing as the pace of the story evolves, especially hong yuye. But the MC doesn't seem to understand that even if his initial thought is good as time goes by he has to improve, for example he just says that he is being arrogant at some point but he doesn't realize that there are times when he has to be arrogant Otherwise he will be devoured or he will just have more problems with arrogant people, and when he gets up to fight with arrogant people they just accept what the MC does and leave it at that, so why is the MC hiding? his power publicly everything remains the same, all the mc's fears that make him stay hidden seem like nothing. Another thing is that he is in a demonic sect, according to MC's description, he shouldn't be able to live a peaceful life just because he doesn't interact with anyone (for example how Lin Zi is treated), people would bully him just for their ego since she They are more "powerful" than the MC and would do several other things, but it seems that the only difference between a demonic sect and an immortal one is the brotherhood between disciples. I think the only significant change in MC is that he realized that he needs to kill people to live, he still lets people walk on him even though he knows that talking to them doesn't solve anything and that's frustrating.

I read up to chapter 533 but dropped it. The first 100 or 200 chapters were interesting but after that it went into a loop, the mc always does the same things, increases his power a little and goes out to get something to increase his power again, things in the novel simply disappear for no reason, for example MC had a demonic mouse and he simply disappeared the author didn't say what happened to him and you, the reader, will never find out, this was just one of the things that happened out of many others that will disappear out of nowhere. The characters are very superficial, when they are introduced we can still understand them a little but then you can only remember that they exist for a few brief lines that the author adds so that they don't disappear out of nowhere like the demonic mouse or the pearl of speed hahahaha

I managed to read until chapter 327 and it was good but then the author simply writes whatever he wants, it even seems like the person writing has changed

I read up to 136 and I'm dropping it, the author has childish writing even if you like the world he created, the plot and everything else can't stand the repetition and all the mistakes. For example the mc will probably have his second male friend in chapter 136 but it's the same thing as the first friend, the mc doesn't fight people as much as possible and almost dies in chapter 136 like an idiot because of that, in chapters 100 + the mc is afraid of his emotions but in the illusion he had he wasn't afraid of his emotions so much so that he didn't break the illusion to take advantage of it anymore. This is so contradictory, the mc devours monsters to become stronger but any normal person practically has the Same physical statistics as him, the mc wanted a peaceful and calm life but in a flash he changes his mind. If the author stopped being so volatile in his writing, he would improve 70% of the novel.

If it weren't for the ending it would be a good read but unfortunately the ending was rushed, a lot was left open so the novel as a whole was horrible, the description of its original world was also changed to fit with the bad and rushed ending. Read it knowing that you will be disappointed in the end and the only good thing is that it only has 216 chapters so it won't waste much of your time.