malhiharjot

It's good story after leaving some things behind,you guys give this story chance,it's way better then letting 5 year old killing Hokage and become a sage or something.this one have some story structure.

In the starting story was good but it start getting worse after 25.. how to make good story bad you read it here . Story development is bad ,

Story has a lazy build up too many factors look like written by a child in his story time, it has failed to gain attraction for it , only good thing is combination of Nara and Uzumaki .

You guys give a try,It's a very good story, with different approach and totally refreshing and characters have a build up character from starting with them making mistakes and learning from it, like how should normal people act like When they power and they have some limitations to it, it's not like other Getting 1 year old child sage mode and bunch off old girl love merry him,some things can be changed but I think some mistakes and meant to be. Some Time one chapter is not good enough either you can combine two into one put some time period between.

Starting was very good, back ground is good too but after some confusion chapters 4 to 6 year skip time ,when MC enter academy everything gone down to drain , MC becomes new feeding spoon to Naruto and sidekick of his, 3 star is honest rating for this story.

Totally idiotic, starting was good .after that everything gone down to drain ...........................................................................................

It's not bad , good story for free time and plenty of chapters and new concept butt it's really boring to read,even after 70 chapters still not getting any interesting .to boring for me ...................................................................................

Too many details are missing and many more holes inside the storyline, how can professor ask about poly potion from first year, after that it was just talking fly nothing important

Review after 20 chapter, he have a genin/Chenin level strength and still don't know three basic academy jutsu but he know b/c level fire jutsu and most of all as a madra he don't know about shadow clone,

It's very good story, hope so he use less blast or otherwise everything is going to solved by blast and story will loose it's interest ................... ..................... .... ........ .....