Easier to make them seem intelligent when it is important..Remember that the MC cannot be brighter than the author 😅

Author, why bring Love and abandon Catherine i do not get it ?

she probably got herself killed by now...

12 years Old..

please do not use the word smart for this MC 🙂

Thank you !!!!!!!!!! I will root for you till the end ! 🤩

Overall a very good story with lots of potencial. Just one problem with the writing.. open a dictionnary and find the definition for intelligent.. then please never associate it with the MC again. Thanks

dumb dumb dumb...

please make him souffert quickly so as to stop this rubbish

A little mistake in my opinion. If he gets rilled up from panic for alina and doesnt even read the whole text at first why does he have time and energy to get angry for something that he got for free ? The speed at which he mentally claims proprety of the system is too fait and the emotions are displaced i think

Do authors make their MC dumb in order to cover their mistakes ?🤔 Otherwise i am clueless as to why they do that ..

Good ideas but the writing is messy. Interactions and events are forced fed and sloppy. Could be great but impossible to get into the story that from my point of vue is lacking too much.

side hobby : inkeeper*

Could have been good with the world building that was great but the author threw the story in the trash with the MC personnality.The MC doesnt want to get stronger and is life always depends on others goodwill. Despite that his arrogance is throught the roof. The side stories are rushed and lack any real substance.A big let down for a story with a great start.

I usually write a comment when I finish a novel or simply drop it but this time the story is simply too good and I can't wait to praise the author. Thank you for the flaw that was given to the Mc it's spot on. Great start !

The Story starts really well. The plot is refreshing and following many stories at a time is quite fun. Theres not much cliche which is a very good point. Overall the novel is good but a few points are quite disappointing. First the main world is completely overlooked and the plot in the main world is basically 2 or 3 interactions with a demon sect and 2 or 3 chapter per character on their personal life. Secondly, the Mc doesn't do anything from start to finish and is simply carried by the system. He doesn't even use try to hide it and things just work by magic. Quite borring.. Last problem, the novel is clearly dropped from chapter 400 and the last 100 chapters are just rushed to reach a quite ending. Could have had a lot of potential if the author didn't drop it.

The plot has potential but it's too hard to move throught the story with that dumb story. There's a few things that just doesn't make sense except dummy. First you learn about dungeon and monsters before getting inside a dungeon (if the author wishes to avoid info dump just say he did look into it and give us info throught the story when it gets relevant). Second.. It doesn't take more than one brain cell to know that upgrade points are easy to acquire at first but could later on get harder to get. So create a safety net for yourself (a real one and not one the author just add awkwardly). Lately, I don't get why he is so calm and composed when all this happens to him. He even accept total strangers as his parents (even more so when he took over their DEAD son's body)...Ps : different body structure, different body language and different way of acting.. Let's be honest if they don't find anything suspicious then don't paint them as great parents...

Like the MC couldn't read the guide book I couldn't read this stuff..Maybe it deserve a read after some time but I can't read 300 chapters of crap before it starts improving 😅 better hope the authors next book is readable from the start

Good start with potential but starting with the first time he entered the village it was awfully hard to read.I've got many thing to say but I'll summerize. If you don't like : brainless, harem, teenage level thinking process, over trusting and slice of life (food oriented) the novel is not for you.

Does the MC man up at some point or does he keep being a dumb coward that will kneel to every one that he sees ? I hate cowardly Mc and despite pushing forward till chapter 59 it doesn't seems to get better.. I don't think the usual Chinese Mc that makes dumb decison based on his ego are good but in this novel he really is just too spinless.. By the way why does every Mc with a system insults them when they are their everything ?