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should be "he is the most vulnerable " i think autocorrect made it venerable

so glad your continuing the story. it was on hiatus for a longer period and i therefore took a break from reading it! I love the story. some characters more then others but thank you for creating such a fantastic workd

should be partial towards him .impartial means unbiased! loving the story though

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sorry for spamming your comment but i forgot to say: All i can say is they are really important to the story. and their back story will be crucial as well. if you decide to stick with my story ty. and look forward to the reupload i hope to have it done by the end of this month or the end of februari depending how much chapters i will have to add and how busy my work is!! if my reupload is completed i will change the cover, so your welcome to wait for that as well. if you do i hope you leave a comment to let me know what you thought of the change!!

i am new to writing and only now learned alot. so i also found out that Bai Georgi's dreams, Bai Lang's personality and Mitzuki's experience in hostile territory is way glossed over. i will be adding some twists to the story which were already there but i was waiting to tell them after rebirth, but now their alive so long it will be pulled forward, so you can expect like ,35 to 55 chapters being insterted before the Maritsu and Gabriel's arc. but i don't want to stop updating for the few readers which are reading my story..... which makes it hard. because like you said, i have lost sight of my two main protagonist.....

i fully agree. i didn't plan on the front of the story being so long, the main characters should be dead by now which would lead me to be able to build the world and it's Paradise, and so i didn't repeat myself i kinda skipped that part. after all if i explained it once then they died and then i had to repeat it all it seemed kind of overkill. now they are still happily alive, i realized that error and therefore i am fully rewriting and re editing my story, but since i have a full time job and need to update daily it takes some time. about 30/35 chapters or probably even more will be added based on Bai Langs and Mitzuki and the world Paradise before and after Bai Lang was abandoned. So while we see Alexis being introduced in those chapters, Maritsu and Gabriel's story arc which i am writing now will be moved way back. their characters are important because the apocalypse focuses on four main groups, so their history, how they knew eachother and what there connections are is important to the story. Mainly Bai Lang, Alexis, Gabriel's and Georgi's group will be the center of the story Therefore I will continue to delve deeper in every character. To know which characters your dealing with and to know why they would do certain actions in the future Paradise Because of my rewrite i will also correct the fact that Bai Lang and Mitzuki kinda seem irrelevant characters now, i already added about 4 chapters, so far, which fully contains world building and Bai Lang. Before even seeing Mitzuki POV when he is on a missiom but i will reupload it when i am fully done, so i hope you will continue to wait.... thank you for your comment. i really appreciate it. and i hope you will enjoy my book. I would be really sorry if you didn't like it..... After all writers create a world hoping that others will enjoy partaking in that world so i hope you give me some time to create a world for you. if not ty for giving my book a chance!

He is. He will suprise is all

thank you only just saw the chapter comments really weird didn't get a message from it before. i did remove it once

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