KILLER_B

Author, can you write who is speaking with a semicolon to make it more clear who is talking. Thanx in advance

Stockholm Syndrome

I apologize if my previous response came across as insulting or dismissive of your hard work.

Raven actions are very creepy and alarming I even felt a slight tension when she repeated said word "mine" over and over again.

You trying to hard by asking these jellyfish authors not specifically this one to have a brain when it counts and their best creation: Bob Uchiha is the epitome of their lack of a said "processing center/brain" to evaluate if something is reasonable or not.

This has been the best chapter but, it has filled my innocent soul with irritation, hate and it’s also got me concocting plans so devious, that even Aizen and Black Zetsu would blush. You better buckle up Author-kun because this vindictive reader has been put on cliffhanger!!

Oh, this book It's like having your funny bone tickled while riding a unicorn through a maze of unexpected twists. The author's a mastermind! Seriously, reading this is like finding a hidden treasure in your sock drawer. Best read ever – no contest!

"Like, reading this is almost as awesome as hitting the Death Star's exhaust port with a proton torpedo. Can't wait for the next chapter to keep blowing my mind. Stay rad, my friends!"

Spreading uninformed beliefs as universal truths is like trying to fit a square peg into a round hole. it's a clumsy, misguided attempt that distorts reality. The premise that "often terrorists are Islam" not only lacks factual support but perpetuates harmful stereotypes, requiring a critical reevaluation for the sake of truth and understanding.

For some peculiar reason, the antagonist in the novel feels eerily like déjà vu, as if some other writer cooked up this tale and you, dear author-kun (if I may be so bold), are just serving it up in a web novel for your own amusement and perhaps, just maybe, for others' entertainment too! Correct me if I'm mistaken—I'm genuinely curious!