Whitestair_Ivory

I think there's an error. There are no more chapters 😢

Boruto is an illusion.

You're better at writing pórn than plot. I think so i am.

Was really good fic. Start was kinda slow with excess monologues and existential crisis then after that it lessened and became quite good. Too bad things went to shît after he came to Hogwarts, i understand trying to add new things to keep it interesting and fresh but just straight up escalating everythings power level is just a bad decision, even a lazy one. It just makes things unnecessarily stretched and tedious.

Asked aroud from raw readers about this. He hides himself to open up the underground boss route, uses sword and says he can't win against Kaido while having 40 percent of Saitamas power. yeaaaaah.......

It's alright but it's not good. Heavy use of AI made each chapter feel bloated so it's kinda tedious to read because sometimes entire chapters are filled with paragraphs that says the same shît but in different words. MC is kinda bland, his personality is like a plain noodle and only the system adds a pinch of salt and pepper on it otherwise no sauce no cheese. Plot is nothing to write home about, just like every Marvel fic that starts with hydra, angst and edge so far nothing exciting. I feel like i wasted my worthless time and braincells to skim through this heavlily bloated fic for nothing.

Pucker up

He takes others purity. I guess it fits.

Temporary as after the war the huge void left will be fought over harder by outsiders.

Sauce?