Ehtimam

Well for starters if you create a story about cultivation fantasy you do need to cultivate the Main Character instead of leaving him for at low level without making him cultivate and become stronger for most of the first 150 ish chapter. That's ridiculous and not necessary. You may call it character development to fancy a little bit but that is not character development but sloppy writing. What is the point of that organised tournament so early in the series?? It would've been so much fun if the MC is powerful but instead you just provide him with unnecessary materials that make him look weak.

After reading 200 chapters I finally feel that the author just doesn't know what he is doing and he doesn't have a clear future plan. First let's talk about MC. Although MC is interoduced as a lucky dog and the whole system business is also great Author reluctantly didn't improved MCs's strength for at least 100 chapters or so. I don't get it why MC needs to be weak. So for 100 or so chapters MC did nothing but host a big event. That event is also questionable cause I don't know the reason why the inn got so many popularity all of a sudden. On a second thought the story was great before that long event. Also I get it that MC is cautious but the outright mistakes he made although the author backed that up saying he has brain tumor.Anyway my whole point is if you are so reluctant to make the MC even fight why not make him a saitama type MC who is already super strong. That way we don't need to see MC is simping or things like this.

I love the idea but I feel like these stories needlessly make the MC weaker for no reason. MC should be someone very strong. That way it can even out these scenarios. I know it's my feelings and all author wants to give CH development to his MC but I think these settings doesn't partoicularly need weak MC.

It's like the cultivation stories always have an issue in the family. Either they are too evil or too mysterious or too chummy.

Like the bangle really ain't gonna give him any boosts. He is a innkeeper what he will gonna do owning a galaxy though

Velma? Seriously dude?

Actually I also forgot why? It's probably dumb bimbo reason who has too much self righteousness installed in her mind.

There are lots of twins.

It is kind of forced but what he can do to change. I mean he was just a little baby at that time. Anyway maybe losing him will change her for good.

It is interesting so I am gonna try it. It has potential.