Void_Hawk

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The military guys when he asks for the meteorite

GOOD UNTIL 35TH CHAPTER. A guy shot a bullet at MC, mc doesn't kill him. A random guy asking MC to take him in. MC shoots the guy on his head. A normal guy to a pychopath. What happened to the logic with this author?

get the **** done with the details. 7 chps still dumping infos.

Reading this feels like a novel written by a Reader rather than an Author. There is no exciting plots, the MC is plain without much character. Supposedly a guy with ***** previous life and plus 17 years, but still acts like a child, no uniqueness to him . Most characters are also bland. This is a mixed fruit juice of a reader who read a lot of beast taming novels.

The title of this novel should be "How not to write a cliche story". I don't know why the author even bother to write. Just like other chinese novels the author dumps a back stabber character who supposedly hate MC while he was in his low. Even though he owes him too much. Just character after character was ripped off of old chinese novels without even bothering to design a plot or character. Same old face slapping to character who hate MC with little to no reason.

Read upto 67 on raw, but still didn't find anything interesting or a proper image of world building. Unlike LOTM which hooks up from the start, this novel seriously lacks any. The author just goes on a never ending phase of storytelling without any twits or fun. So it's a disappointment for me.

stupid cliché..

I can't digest the fact that there is always someone who offends MC for no reason. why do cn novels use this cliche always.