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How is M connected ? Lanlingster and augustus both have no M. The inconsistency is the biggest turnoff of this novel.😡

I can’t. I tried but the mc is an idiot. He fails to use his gift and asks permission for this and that. Thought he was supposed to be a king. It feels like a great gift was wasted on irredeemable trash taht a hi old just die. I feel like Licia has more personality than him. And while I’m at it let me add that his name if stupid too. Doesn’t have mc vibe. I ve seen extra’s with better names.

True. Atleast Camilla’s situation could understood since it was her stepmom trying to protect her son or whatever. But this is just ridiculous.

The amount of grammar mistakes. 🤦🏻‍♂️, pls get an editing software ( there’s a lot of free ones) . It really throws me off trying to understand what’s intended from what’s written.

The premise is good and I he system seems decent too but the speed of plot advancement and the irrelevance of cultivation throws you off. There’s no political intrigue. It’s more of a action cultivation novel where the mc is an emperor. The worst is the inconsistency in translation, which ranges from names of the empires, cultivation levels, characters and more. Even the mc’s name has a George in it at one point for some reason. In conclusion, even if the plot is decent with potential, the translation leaves it abysmal to read.

@author This book is so good. But there’s a lot of grammatical errors. It could be solved if you had grammarly or an editor, and would improve the quality of the writing drastically.

Which country is this black palace from ?

I don’t mean the sound rude but I really like the story and think you’re doing an excellent job with the plot so far so I hope you take my advice. Find an editor or something like Grammarly Pro. There’s spelling errors and repeated and rephrased sentences that reduce the overall quality of the work and the story content conveyed. It is my belief that It would increase the quality of your writing if you can address these things.

The Illuminati would’ve hit better. I’m not loving illuminatos

It’s more likely to be plot armor. The fool path’s authority has fate and spirit related stuff so it’s probably influencing lumian. And he probably needs it since he’s in the crosshairs of an outer god.