DragonFeather

Didn’t get to far but its a very Decent story just i feel like the Mark Romance part is just really of…. like Mark acts normal but how Elayne is so Dense around naive with him is really hard to Read. I dont know what the social norms are in this world but taking a grown ass man, that you dont like yet, to see your parents. Like shes been Married before so shes gotta know what she is doing to Mark But yea maybe this gets better when she finally understands her feelings but Elayne is like a Naive Clingy Mother to the nth degree that is hard to imaging

Story is going great so far but the amount of “he” is way too much. Its confusing if your trying to talk about the Mc or someone else

Why is there so Much “he” when Referring to mc.

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