Mike_Mikelson_7125

Corrected "...took the book".

I hadn't read wrong, I posted a comment on the wrong chapter. Most likely unintentionally scrolled down. It was for previous chapter, number 29, paragraph 59 or something. "Viree took the journal and read..."

Viree read the journal. But she was illiterate one chapter ago, maybe I missed something, but there were no "learning montage" about this, they have gone on adventure almost immediately.

"...thousands of birds and other flying mammals.." Dude, birds aren't mammals). There are flying mammals ofc, like bats, but I suggest to drop all this "mammal" thing altogether because they are not known to fly over seas very much.

Once again reinventing "curse of the sea" to work in any water is clearly non-canon, it works either in seawater or by touching kairoseki - "the seastone". It was stated that the seawater in One Piece world is radiating some kind of waves - which is unscientific, but it is what it is. What makes sense and what does not by OP world inner logic is up to Oda to decide. Vegapunk theoretised, that devil fruits are manifestations of human desires. It is strange, to put it mildly, to hear such esoteric theory from supposed "world's best scientis", because it pulls the whole story more to "faith" and "power of friendship's" end of the spectrum than actual science, but it is canon. Either we take this by face value or simply stop reading "One Piece". By your logic DF's should not work at all - because their users clearly drink water every day, which means it they are always in contact with it - it is splashing in their stomachs. That would certainly be a dumb thing to read.

T 72 has three people in it's crew - mechanic-driver, gunner and commander. Loading is automated, but if all pre-loaded ammo is expended then commander takes loader's functions upon himself.

I will give it full marks as far as ch. from 1 to 24 goes. One of the best GOT fics out there. The writing quality is great, although there are some minor stylistical mistakes such as repetitions in obe of the battle scenes overall the stylization is almost perfect. The plot is logical and realistic, MC's advantages come purely from political and economic situation and his rise makes sense from the world's inner logic. I almost wait for something ridiculous in the future, like successful expedition to the Old Valyria or some other pie from the sky, that's how smooth it is until now. Compared to other fics(especially kingdom building ones) it is pure gold, don't miss it.

If the swordsman is able to attack the spearman that means one thing - he got out of spear's tip range and inside of the spearman's defence. After that the spearman won't be able to attack or defend effectively as author imagined. Two choices - either he drops his spear and tries to pull out his dagger or whatever side weapon he has to fight for his life(actually he most likely will try to engage in brawling, but it is too much to ask here) or - he will die. Spears in general are not suited for duels or fencing, as far as I'm aware there were no such thing as "spear fencing schools", short halberds - yes, for naginatas in Japan, spears - none. Spear shines in infantry lines, not in duels, if you are unable to consistently hold your adversary at the spear's tip - you will lose, that's the iron law. Pure game logic and no understanding of medieval arsenal.

First 3 chapters that are available at the time of the review are unusually good by this site usual quite low standarts. Author knows how to write and does so rather splendidly. 5 stars for now, although that may change after the main plot starts and there will be more opportunities for the author to fall into the same laughable tropes usual ASOIAF fanfic writers.

"As the apples were more heavy then leaves the were the first ones to reach..." Time for elementary physics, kids. Mass does not affect speed of falling objects on our planet in any significant way. Here is how you deduct the time in which an object falls - t=√ (2h/g), there is no mass in the formula. What affects the speed is air resistance, and an apple will fall faster then a leaf because of its aerodynamic form. Mass significantly affects the energy on impact though which could be mistakenly associated with speed of a falling object. A guy named Galileo Galilei found this by throwing stuff from the Leaning Tower of Pisa at 1589, so you don't have to).