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lol why you looking at my description you just wasted your time reading this lol
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Catch Some bug pokemon and give it to the aburame clan I know for a fact they would probably defend the mc brutally after all they seem like a reaonable clan the type that would defend the mc in the very least they are quiet Give some dog pokemon to the inuzaka
Thats a good roast
Skyrhim ah dialog
I like this one
Dont know much about dnd but this shuld be interesting
Darn imagine a girl with angs personality
Gender bent ang?
Never said you were writing one lol
I Was using that as a example i wasnt saying this story has a system i was saying im sick of op mcs like im sick of antai hero mcs villan mcs anf system storys Because ive read so many of them over time ya know XD Your storys Pretty good so far All things considering be proud of it
Like I hate systems for the most part These days cus they have been used so much
Your storys pretty good just getting tired of the same thing over and over sorry if you thought I was insulting your story Its the story equivalent of getting forced to eat oreos for three years first year you still may like oreos Your storys good just im so tired of the same stuff ya know XD
I’m personally getting Really tired of godlike power Mcs like its its one thing if its like one or two heck even Half but a majority choose way to overpowered things for the mc and its almost always villan or antai hero mcs It was nice in the beginning but its been over 3 years sence this trend started now its very rare not to have a mc that can nuke all his enemys
You gave The mc Bloody kaguya powers mc is basically a god could have toned down on the power set mabie instead of the byakugan/rinnegan /kaguya otsutski give him The bone kaguya clan guy abilities
Bro gotta hit the gym then
Or keep all those op spy ninja and turn your village into something that dousent hide your actions so it wont matter what your own shinobi overhear and if your finna do something bad do it brazenly dont hide your actions walk right in and take all of the hiden sands gold in compensation give em as much food as they need Boost your already strong fighting force to the max improve on your already good points If your disgusing war then do it in a place lit up with no shadows Its a easy fix for a clan of perfect spys what happend to the uchihas is peak stupidity if naruto Did not come along konoha would definitely have declined rapidly With the death of kakishis father the uchiha the senju thats Two of the big founding clans with huge fighting power then you have the hyuga who would have had there main branch heir taken that most likely would have led to a dangerous situation in the hyuga clan where there are less hyuga The karuma clan got wiped out and that girl with the Two personalitys would be Killed The they wouldent even have had the uzumaki Naruto and his bloodline hizeren would die and probably a huge chunk of his clan danzo would eventually be overwhelmed his old age preventing him from using his abilities to his fullest A bunch if strong clans is best for the leaf village its the reason they are the strongest village if a Clan gets a power boost no matter how scarry its best to keep it live and well and even encourage them to grow
Its not confirmed also mc can bring her back via rinnegan