Elude

But yeah, the special people are only like 2-3 in Tylem’s tutorial, and there’s a reason for that ^.^

I’m already changing the name, but for contracted novels, I needed to fill in a form to change it + it is only processed at the end of the month

Thanks for the feedback, and regarding the ‘Tutorial’, that’s just the name and so much more info will be given later about everything

Yeah, that’s why I took some time to go over everything again so that I can give more each chapter with a proper, fun-to-read pace. Thanks for the feedback :)

But yeah, I thought about the beating part as well for a long time. If he can get the answers through peaceful discussion, what is the point of a beating, which might just make her keep things from him/lie to him + plot against him later on. Like, Tylem isn’t trying to go about and prove his strength to everyone.

There are many pecular things in this world, and regarding Yua, everything will make sense later on in the future. And about the beating up part, why would Tylem even do that to Yua in the first few moments when he knows next-to-nothing about her, and she’s given him the sole ‘help’ so far on how to get out of here alive. Furthermore, she was giving him answers when he tried to go about everything peacefully. Who’s to say she would do the same/say anything at all if he went about it through violence? Honestly, I’m the type of person who thinks that there isn’t a need to resort to solving everything through mindless violence ->instantly<-.There are still ten days to go, and he’ll get every bit of information he can progressively and not force her to spit out everything through violence in less than an hour. And about the bipolar bit, I did mention that in the story, but I don’t think this is at all. Also, with a childhood/first life like that, it is quite natural. I gave him development a few chapters prior that he wouldn’t just randomly kill/force people without caring at all in the open, and I’m not going to just throw that out of the window. Thanks for reading!

Look at you... asking for spoilers (once again? can’t remember xD.)

Oh yes, I think I wrote some reviews before I started writing a bit myself on this site. I haven’t read in a while, but do you prefer FL or ML books? It depends on your preference and what genre you like, haha. Thanks for reading my novel though.

Yeah, I’ll admit that the story reads better in one sitting. I guess I’ll think about your suggestion