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Still mentioning the abandoned char that was killed off for no reason?

can't even spell intent correctly.

No talent author. A total loser [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Really shit story at least the current 4 chapters released are. While the previous fic had some promise and was overall enjoyable this is pure shit. I think the author is really desperate if he really opened a patreon for this abomination.

Making 10 children when you can not provide for even a single one is pure evil. These children will not get any kind of good education and will be most likely be criminals and menaces who will flee their countries and cause other countries much harm. Also it's extremely selfish to produce 10 kids when the world is already overpopulated. Also these people are usually extremely stupid which will is a joke because that will allow them to literally spread their stupidity on a genetic level.

you got owned :)

needledick

In this nerds world because he is as thin as a needle. Needledick, needlearms and needlelegs. Needleman world.

Yes it is. He can just use a shadow clone with like 1% of his chakra or even use a wind clone which is even cheaper.

Nope. If someone strikes you and you hold out your shield to block it, only the defensive power / properties of the shield should count. It makes no sense for example that boots or shoulderpads make the defensive properties of other items stronger. Stat boosting items are fun and interesting but only if you create a system where weapons & armors have inherent offensive / defense properties (including durability).

Unreadable stupid nonsense chinese fic with a shitty system. Totally garbage. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] Taking a bad MTL novel and then adding random shit and giving up midway.

Total garbage low effort clone of an aweful chinese fanfic. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Just reading the summary of this story is already enough to know it is utter garbage. Why write a story in a language you are not proficient in? [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Unreadable. Worst grammar & writing ever. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap] [img=faceslap][img=faceslap] [img=faceslap][img=faceslap] [img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2.6 / 5 Why so low? This is basically canon. It's nearly identical to canon... of course it neither has the charm, nor the art of the original which makes it feel extremely cheap and shallow. What are the differences? MC has a power that makes no sense, even by OP standards and has a devilfruit that is so OP it should not exist. Still author manages to make it incredibly weak. Overall MC barely adds anything worthwhile to story... just some extra comments but at the same time she constantly plays dumb and nothing drastically changes.

SPLASHED not SLASHED

Some writing inside of it is really creative but I agree... it's essentially a 650 chapter prologue and we constantly read about the MC and his cheat dimension daily life. It gets boring and you forget his 100 Pokemon... not only does he have a shitton of Pokemon but multiple Pokemon per species... WAY TOO MUCH. This is why I said I prefer this story over it. Sadly there are not too many good Pokemon fics around.

cringe