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99niloy

99niloy

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Fantasy enthusiasm

2018-06-28 Se unióBangladesh
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  • 99niloy
    99niloy4 months ago
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    It is not about preference but rather the limitation of the world-building. Also if you want to improve the idea of a power source you need to add some limitations like he needs to acquire some power source or to update the quality or quantity of the ability.

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    99niloy5 months ago
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    I think the use of energy to improve the Pokemon IDEA is not a good one. The same storyline focusing more on the journey would have been better. Also, there are limitations such as what a Pokemon can learn and can concentrate on that would enrich the story more. Great work.