Mp0438

I didn't know about this story until today but I'm hooked.

this chapter is really jumbled together, with how the dialogue is all in the same paragraph. if you separate the dialogue into individual paragraphs it would make it so much easier to read.

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was he raised as a child soldier? if so, his morals should be more skewed than acting like a regular teenager. this scene comes off as her manipulating him more than giving advice. he is acting like a normal teen and not a soldier or assassin in this chapter.

yes you are! I don't know how you found me and entered my home but someone help!

the chapter feels out of place since Grim is on a case but then pov switches and leaves you hanging about what's going on with Grim and Jessica.

system of a down reference?

I'd fail that class.

it's fun watching him interact with both women. they honestly have good chemistry together. wonder what happened to squirrel girl? not that I like the character just curious why she stood him up.

he just made fun of her and then calls out his attack name lol.