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Basso2142

Basso2142

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Just writing as a hobby

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  • Basso2142
    Basso2142a year ago
    respondió a Rookni

    The fast development of his team is by design but I agree I can slow it down a little bit, although it has been 100k words already and Firefly has still not evolved into Charizard. I don't want to spoil things but I have a "solution" that is not a xianxia trick to the situation, the only tip I can offer is that it's related to Leaf and will make journeying to other regions in the future something possible. I mean, every pokemon fic seems to revolve only around a single region, the journey starts with the first pokemon and ends with a cataclysmic showdown against a legendary or against one of the terrorist organizations. I want to eventually have Emmet go against everything Ash did (with some small exceptions), so the story has to allow him to have a way to travel through the world and beat each League while tackling the issues of the regions in a timely fashion. The fast growth is necessary, otherwise him facing Mewtwo and standing his ground will be even more ludicrous.

  • Basso2142
    Basso2142a year ago
    respondió a King_Yosh

    I'm not a fan of angst but I get your point, I will strive to improve in this aspect and maybe this fic will eventually be something you like :)

  • Basso2142
    Basso2142a year ago
    respondió a Mamamesta

    I get your point and will take it in consideration moving forward. Him being a 15 year old with a sheltered life made him oblivious to a lot of things, I will focus more on putting him in situations that will make him mature faster, but it is hard to capture how people mature with words. All I can do is promise to improve this aspect. Hope you stick around enough to see the results :)

  • Basso2142
    Basso2142a year ago
    respondió a qwasipoke

    Your question is totally valid. One of the most important aspects I'm trying to approach as the story develops is how exactly EM works and in which scenarios it is "triggered".I don't want to spoil much but during this first part (Kanto part of the journey) Emmet will learn a little bit about EM but won't explore it in depth for a multitude of reasons, one of them is indeed that he is a 15 year old with absolute no experience in handling pokemon at all. I hate to be cryptic but I can't seem to find a way to properly explain it to you without giving away one of EM's major weaknesses.What I can say is that when I designed EM I started with what it couldn't do, not what it could do. And so far in the story none of the "can't" have been shown.

  • Basso2142
    Basso2142a year ago
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    What can I say? I find myself enjoying what I wrote even when rereading it to make sure I didn't make any mistake, so it's OK, I guess? I'm writing just for fun and practice, so I devote a reasonable time to the outline and few details of the world I'm building (upon the sometimes nonsensical one from Pokemon). What I try to do is get as close in quality to my favorite Pokemon Fanfics, Hard Enough from Viva01 and The New Normal from CartecFF. If my fic get half as good as theirs I will be pretty happy with myself. Have a great time reading Pokemon EM and any other novels!

  • Basso2142
    Basso2142a year ago
    respondió a JoyousRebellion

    Haha it's not a cultivation novel, don't worry about it

  • Basso2142
    Basso21422 years ago
    respondió a SagaLF11

    Thank you! You know, when the first person mentioned that, I thought they were just trying to scare me for fun. But after hearing the same warning for the hundredth time, I'm starting to think they're onto something lol

  • Basso2142
    Basso21422 years ago
    Publicado por

    As the author, I'm delighted to give this story a 5-star review to help kickstart its momentum. I began writing this fiction a few weeks ago purely for enjoyment, and I've recently decided to share it with you all. Please be aware that the release schedule is not yet firmly established, as my baby girl was born just 8 days ago, and we're still adjusting to our new family routine. However, things have been settling down over the past few days, and I'm confident that I can deliver at least 3 chapters per week as I work on building a substantial backlog. Thank you for your understanding and support!

  • Basso2142
    Basso21422 years ago
    respondió a El_Fuego

    The original story is called Path of Ruin [Star Wars SI], it is already completed in another website. i'm still not sure this version is from the same author. So far it is a complete copy and paste

  • Basso2142
    Basso21422 years ago
    respondió a Filippo_Manzone

    The original story is called Path of Ruin [Star Wars SI], it is already completed in another website. i'm still not sure this version is from the same author. So far it is a complete copy and paste

Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)

Emmet fights off a soul invasion from a transmigrator equipped with a cheat power. In the process, he gains not only Pokémon knowledge but also a unique ability called Efficiency Mastery. Psychic powers? Yes, he can develop them now. Fighting Type energy? Why wouldn't he be able to manipulate it? And what is that? EM (Efficiency Mastery) bleeds over to the pokemon bound he has with his team and make them grow at extraordinary speeds? Is there a limit? Now armed with these tools, Emmet is skeptical. Can he really rely on Ash, who's often too naive and sometimes even stupid for his own good, to repeatedly save the world? Not on his watch. This fic includes death and violence althought it is not the main focus. Just a warning that it is not a slice of life or something "light". There is not a "word count chapter" or anything of the sort, just a straight up fiction for you to enjoy.

Basso2142 · Derivados de obras
3.8
36 Chs

The Wizards of Ice and Fire [HIATUS]

Rewrite in progress When Harry Potter and his wife, Daphne Potter, return to Britain after decades of traveling the world, they find themselves facing an unexpected tragedy - the disappearance of their son. Desperate for answers, they turn to the Unspeakables in the Department of Mysteries, which leads them to the enigmatic Veil of Death. As they stand before the Veil, they are ambushed by a group of masked wizards, forcing them to make a fateful decision. Thrown into the Veil, Harry and Daphne are reincarnated in the world of Westeros as Jon Snow and Daena Rogare. In this unfamiliar realm, the couple must navigate the intricate web of alliances and rivalries that define the harsh realities of Westeros, all while seeking a way to make peace with their past and enjoy their new shot at life. Schedule of Release: One chapter every Wednesday and Sunday Until I build a bigger backlog, I will only publish 2 chapters every week.

Basso2142 · Derivados de obras
Sin suficientes valoraciones
18 Chs

The Madec Legacy

The dawn of Emotion Based A.I.s is here, John is the fifth test subject to have an AI implemented in his brain, and so far the first one to survive. Blinded by the dream of immortality, the researchers push the tests to inhumane standards. John is obligated to take part in sessions of torture designed to test the limits of the AI influence over the physical and mental health. What was supposed to be a new beginning in life turns into living hell. An (un)lucky twist ends his life. John then reincarnates with his AI in a new world where a System influences the interaction between Magic and Matter. With seemingly limitless potential and a game-like system influencing the world, the hero sets on his journey. --AUTHOR NOTE, PLEASE READ-- I will state here my promises to you, potential reader: 1. No harem! I don't trust myself to make a harem feel natural or healthy, I never met any person who has a personality that can adapt and live in a harem for reasons that are not monetary, so I can't draw inspiration from real life. Sorry!; 2. The enemies will not be bland and illogically mean. Some may feel like that at first, but I will take great care in fleshing them out, trust me. You may end up hating some, but you won't be able to deny that they had their reasons for what they did; 3. I am using a paid (and expensive) automated editor tool, and I take longer to write because I take my time in editing the stuff I write. I am aiming to improve and I will not shy away from constructive criticism, nor take offense for no reason; 4. Characters will die and will suffer, some will get over the tragedies and improve, others will not be as resilient. 5. This novel has a lot of ground to cover, it is neither a short story, a manual on crafting, or the script of some action scene. There will be both time skips and oversimplifications of some actions for the sake of moving the story forward. Time skips will be more prominent in the first 30 chapters. I will describe crafting processes and fights with more detail if they are essential for the chapter; 6. If I took my time describing something, it's because it is important. I hate novels that wastes time describing useless stuff. If you skim over something, the chances are that something in the future will not make sense. I am an adept of "Chekhov's gun" principle; 7. If in the future Webnovel comes to offer me a contract, I will first reach for the readers to know their opinion and see if they want to donate through other sites or not. It would be a dream come true to live of writing, but not if the cost is the alienation from the people that supported me along the way; 8. I already have 31k words on my auxiliary documents, I have a plan for the story, and I will not be making changes even if someone ends up noticing some foreshadowing and figures out what will happen. The story comes first. 9. I have a wife, a job that demands 9h every day and courses related to my job (lawyer) three days of the week, it's unlikely that I will be able to do mass releases at all. I will have a healthy amount of chapters to be able to post at least 1 chapter every day continually. Don't worry. 10. I will read all the comments. I will listen to all you have to say and will try my best to accommodate demands as long as they do not hamper the path I prepared. 11. There is an arc that spans the entire novel. Each volume will be an arc in itself while progressing a little bit of the main arc. Every arc will have one or more main antagonists. I think that's it! Thank you for reading it all. Have an awesome time reading my first novel!!

Basso2142 · Fantasía
4.8
31 Chs