Kalsapher

you must not have gotten far bro this is an incest book

So this is grind is my ninja way and the chapters are in the 200s still has the blatant Chinese problems but yea this is not the first translation of the story the other one is still updating last I checked

So I don't know if you are the original author or not but there's a copy of this called naruto venom didn't get to far into it it got like 57 chapters at this point but figured I'd let you know.

Overall its actually pretty good. Its not the first time someone made an Uzumaki/Uchiha mix but this one works. Writings good and I love the lack of blatant chinese racism way too much of that here. Unfortunately I am not a fan of the relationships. I find it suuuuuuuuppppppper creepy and can not get past it. It just ruins the story for me. So while I will personally drop this I will still say its a solid naruto ff.

pretty sure you mean slifer the sky dragon because Ras attk is called god cannon or something along those lines.

Hiruzens wife is biwako sarutobi

ima assume qi is meant to be Chakra.

what messed up time-line is this

messed up the names by a generation

This one fits the sloooooooowwwwww roll to a T. Been reading this one for awhile I actually dropped it at 157 originally due to how insufferably slow the story is going but decided to come back and read more due to boredom. The story and writing don't really have any problems other than how long what feels like should be one chapter is spread into three. The mc is also a sore spot for me as everytime he hints at his special ability or origin it never fully gets explained despite some people actually knowing about it. I highly doubt genjustu resistance or full immunity is what your going for here but it is kinda annoying that now I've read upto 285 and all ive got is a connection to root and the genjustu thing. Despite Hiruzen mentioning something about him in the early chapters. Now normally in a story this wouldnt be an issue but with how slow everything is going it just made me even more annoyed. Plus do you have to cover every psychological thing he comes up against? Also still a genin at this stage is a bit late. Yea he was part of the war and before that part of the police but again way too slow of development. 300 chapters to chuunin maybe? Another 300 to jounin or if this keeps pace itll be special jounin first. Which again would not be a problem if it wouldnt take 5yrs real time to reach. So if im interested at that time Ill come back but for now ill drop it yet again.