Baitlover99

he just sick

stop posting this. I want to read a chapter, not an author's note promoting his Patreon. If you're going to let people know about it put it at the end of a chapter.

it's not that big of a deal. I didn't mean to hurt your feelings. i gave a truthful review and even said if you are a person that liked harem, you would like the story. I have nothing against the story it's just not the type of story I enjoy. and I haven't spammed anything. this is my first time giving a review in a while for any fanfic. don't take it personally. if I cause any bad feelings, my bad, but it was a truthful review.

this story had promise in the beginning, but then the author decided there is no need for a story when you can just have lemons and random romance in the middle of know where. for people that like harem and just 18+ scenes, this is for you, I guess. Overall, if the story actually happens, then the fanfic might be good, but for now, it's just a person trying to live out there fantasy in writing. There's nothing wrong with that but it's not a story.

I just got to this chapter. Got to say the best coiling dragon fanfic I ever read. Hope the author posts another chapter soon. I really like how it's not just a power-hungry MC trying to get to the top power without anyone around him. Plus it helps that it's not a harem. Thanks author-san for all the chapters so far.

if you're going to make people pay then leave the site. the story seems good but no one should be paying for it. you don't even have any other story before this so everyone who has read the first 4 chapters won't care.

nice

this should not be a TVD fanfic. it's more of a guy banging girls. there is no story, and the world background is a bunch of supernatural shows put together so the MC can bang chicks from other shows. the MCs power is good if only he used it. But if you want to read about a guy banging girls from supernatural shows, then it's for you. if you're trying to read something with a store, then move on and look for something else.

yes